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The trick is to be grateful when your mood is high and graceful when it is low. Richard Carlson
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Who lives fully? Oh, such a sight to foresee! A life so valuable, so graceful, and so carefree With every passing day, raw insights mold. A quilt of tales, a life worth relating to gold In such an enormous and chaotic universe. A tremendous grace symphony, a karmic verse Unspoken dancing with exquisite footwork Heart and intellect are enthralling for the network.   In this ethereal universe, grace rules supreme. Witness the riotous swirl of an opulent dream. Akin to a swan in still waters, it glides with ease. Through every swirl and turn, it aims to please. In this refined world of demeanor and charm, Where cuteness finds its place, in a grace arm From inept souls to those with aesthetic eyes, Let us witness the antelope's lithe sighs.   With gentle gestures and a voice serene. A language of grace that's seldom seen Their eyes orate volumes with every glance. A silent communication, a cosmic dance With gazelle feats, their steps lilting In refined motion, willowy and beguiling. No cumbersome stumble, no swallow of pride, Fluent and slender, glide with a sylph stride. Consort kindness, from sullen to refined, Irreligious views, swapped by goodwill, bind. In this world of amnesty and dower grace, Blest with piety, they effortlessly embrace   In the intricacies of every choreographed zest, Imbue the essence of what it means to nest, Kindness and pristine passion can transcend All quests and discordances are keen to mend. A stance of graceful behavior, a testament, Might love and respect, and how are meant? To steer us through life with dignity and grace, To induct a realm where clear heed bears place.

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Date: 10/8/2023 11:34:00 PM
Sotto, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image, music, and quote, Constance
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Date: 10/5/2023 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on a 1st place win!
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Date: 9/30/2023 9:51:00 PM
You have chosen the words so effectively emphasizing the beauty of a life lived in kindness and graciousness. The poem has deep philosophical insights. As ever, your rhymes are impeccable. Really enjoyed reading your poem. All the Best.... dear friend.
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Date: 9/29/2023 10:24:00 PM
There is so much to love in your poem. Your rhyming is impeccable, and the weave of your words so beautiful. I applaud your style.
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:09:00 AM
Kindness is rare but precious! And you’ve woven this so gracefully in an intricate manner, flowing your rhymes in a seamless rhythm.your choice of words and how you articulate lines are surreal and so profound’ i love the depth of this and philosophical touch of your write. Especially in your opening lines and ending where you’ve conveyed so much wisdom in sheer eloquence! Swan in still waters and so much more there creates such palpable imagery! Love this. As always you’ve nailed it
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Date: 9/29/2023 6:16:00 AM
Kindness and grace resonate throughout my friend. Wonderful word choices convey your theme splendidly Lasaad. Words woven in great vocabulary.
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:36:00 AM
You have touched my heart with the video of my favourite conductor, Andre Rieu. Grace rules supreme. How important is that quote! Brilliant poem, great rhyme, and wonderful vocabulary.
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:31:00 AM
A great analogy my friend and as always your rhymes and flow are on point... You really know how to weave your words together to create imagery and that is evident here once again..
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Date: 9/28/2023 7:11:00 PM
Excellent rhyming as always. Your vocabulary surpasses All poets I have ever seen. But It's the .... How do you hide the truth of the Gospell? Too many words may be the answer. But tesimony is what is required of us and your has been given.
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Date: 9/28/2023 5:32:00 PM
Your selection of adjectives, sharply and clearly define graceful. "Kindness and pristine passion can transcend All quests and discordances are keen to mend." Great message. Oh and your vocabulary is massively bigger than mine for you to come up with all those fancy words. Great poem though! 10/10.
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Date: 9/28/2023 3:39:00 PM
There's so much to like in your poem--the imagery and the wisdom is subtle yet compelling. I agree with you and in summary, live life gracefully and graciously with kindess and respect...allows one to transcend this world and one's ego...enough said. Enjoyed your sublime creation, Sotto. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 9/28/2023 3:14:00 PM
You included so many lovely images of gracefulness in this poem, Sotto.
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Date: 9/28/2023 12:53:00 PM
- Life is not always easy... seize the opportunities and chances life has to offer... a wonderful poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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