Grace Completes Nature

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Dark trees, ferns, await dawn’s stability.

Winking sunlight through pines tranquility.

Minsters conceptual reality,

becoming a part of you willingly.

Brilliance with mental capability,

showing modesty and humility.

A living, breathing, viability

fluttering independent entity,

shine purely within the vicinity.

My mind’s eye exceeds my ability

8/23/2016

A MONORHYME OF 10 LINES  10- SYLLABLES PER LINE

*Minster (church) is an honorific title given to particular churches in England, 
*conceptual
1.	of, relating to, or based on mental concepts.

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Date: 8/31/2016 7:43:00 AM
Congrats Eve, for your placement with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 8/30/2016 10:01:00 PM
Congrats Eve to win on so sweet a poem. Hugs
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Date: 8/30/2016 3:37:00 PM
Eve, beautifully written dear lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/29/2016 6:51:00 PM
Ya done good, sweetie. Hugs and congratulations.
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:59:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend Eve...well done...^WW^
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Date: 8/29/2016 4:37:00 PM
Very nice Eve thanks for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 8/24/2016 11:47:00 AM
Well penned Eve. GL.:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/25/2016 10:47:00 PM
Suits, thank you . Hugs Eve
Date: 8/23/2016 3:49:00 PM
this dazzling work awes me, eve... so enchanting as always!.. nature becomes you..huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/23/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, I had one thing in mind and turned out to be something else. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/23/2016 3:29:00 PM
Mrs Eve, sometimes monorhymes seem forced but yours flows well and was a pleasure to read. If for contest, good luck!
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/23/2016 5:25:00 PM
Thank you so very much ,Daniel, I think that these monorhymes are forced they are very difficult to do to make them sound have way decent.
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