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Grace Completes Nature

Dark trees, ferns, await dawn’s stability.

Winking sunlight through pines tranquility.

Minsters conceptual reality,

becoming a part of you willingly.

Brilliance with mental capability,

showing modesty and humility.

A living, breathing, viability

fluttering independent entity,

shine purely within the vicinity.

My mind’s eye exceeds my ability

8/23/2016

A MONORHYME OF 10 LINES  10- SYLLABLES PER LINE

*Minster (church) is an honorific title given to particular churches in England, 
*conceptual
1.	of, relating to, or based on mental concepts.
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Kimathi Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Congrats Eve, for your placement with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
Dutta Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Congrats Eve to win on so sweet a poem. Hugs
Scars Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Eve, beautifully written dear lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 6:51 PM
Ya done good, sweetie. Hugs and congratulations.
Warrior Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Congrats!!! my friend Eve...well done...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Very nice Eve thanks for your entry, congrats on a fine placement!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Well penned Eve. GL.:)
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 10:47 PM
Suits, thank you . Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 3:49 PM
this dazzling work awes me, eve... so enchanting as always!.. nature becomes you..huggs
Roper Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Nette, I had one thing in mind and turned out to be something else. Hugs Eve
Turner Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Mrs Eve, sometimes monorhymes seem forced but yours flows well and was a pleasure to read. If for contest, good luck!
Roper Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Thank you so very much ,Daniel, I think that these monorhymes are forced they are very difficult to do to make them sound have way decent.
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