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Grace and Solitude

I come consistent, end-of-day

          To lay my troubles down and pray

               Beside those worries that I weigh

     On hushing sands that trim the bay

Thru sun or rain, in bright or gray

          For wondered hours gone astray

               Reposed in twilight's soft bouquet

     Thus seeking life's sweet interplay

To shift and shape this grand ballet

          While drowning in the day's decay

               Amidst the bloom of nature's fray

     I set loose cares and drown dismay

No brooding with "poor-me's" cliche'

          Seclusion birthed of Hemingway

               This shore, my peaceful protege'

     A timeless friend to doubts, allay

And leave the griefs of yesterday ...

          Let strains, like seas, just ease away

               Soft, come the evening, come what may

     Though softer, still, the moon's display

As slow, it creeps, to peep the cay

          Oh here my soul shall ALWAYS stray

               Where silence, peace and grace repay ...

     Swept shore-ward ... love's last castaway.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Grace And Solitude" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.
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Blodgett Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 5:39 PM
Love the words and the message it conveys but really like the formatting. Great write. I will read again for sure.
Drowley Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 2:42 PM
'Greg, Congratulations on another excellent write! Well captured grace and solitude with perfect mood. David'
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 7:13 PM
What a fantastic monorhyme this is Greg! Your imagery is stunning! Congratulations on your deserving First Place! Your writing reminds me a little of Hemingway. Blessings xxoo
Chutani Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 8:38 AM
Rhyming grace and seeking life's interplay in solitude. Lovely muse. Congrats. Best. Mohan.
Agustin Avatar
May 10, 2020 at 6:23 AM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Kauffman Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 9:47 PM
As always, Greg, beautiful images expressing your theme. I agree with John - very creative, very powerful, rhyme scheme. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win! Blessings to you my friend.
Watt Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 5:48 PM
Excellent choice for #1 win in this contest. Your monorhyme was elegantly rendered, your shape (left AND right, not easy), your classic style, your nods to nature, your clever wording ("Amidst the bloom of nature's fray", just one example), and your message of quietude all made this a very pleasurable read. Going in my faves. Great poetry, my friend!
Hamilton Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 4:18 PM
I never imagined someone could make mono-rhyme so interesting, could not help but be a winner! Well done G!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 4:29 PM
Beautiful, my friend. Check his rules again! Something I almost did not catch when I did my write.
Barden Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea - I would have missed it. Blessings! :o)
Sergi Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Hi Gregory: loved the poem! especially, "Seclusion birthed by Hemingway."
Barden Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much, my friend, I'm pleased you enjoyed it! He is a heavy influence of mine, though I never agreed with all his views - what an imagist he was! :o)
Ligon Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 11:08 AM
This must have been difficult to continue mono-rhyme all the way through. Lots of creative ideas!
Barden Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:48 PM
Thank you, Juliet - I could have kept going but I think monorhyme gets monotonous and obviously forced after a while. Blessings, my friend! :o) <3
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 6:56 AM
This is one more gem in your splendid creations, Greg--your words always achieve perfection in realm of poetry. No doubt a TOP win for you.
Barden Avatar
May 6, 2020 at 7:47 PM
You are very kind, Vijay, and I thank you so much! Blessings, Friend! :o)
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