Grace 1

A Girl even as a toddler her tiny hands cuddles a doll
	She sits on the ground properly, covers her shoulders with a shawl 
	Take her baby doll to her lap, rock and sings, her favourite lullaby 
	She bathes her, combs her hair, feeds her, even changes her doll’s nappy
	A Mother’s care for her child is shown even before she could walk
	Nature is so strange, like a grown up woman how she plays this roll
	She couldn’t be parted she sleeps with her doll beside her pillow
	Wherever she goes her doll is dragged along the pavement safely 
	A Girl even as a toddler
	She rapidly marches to her luscious youth so sweet her next call 
	Wrapped up in the Mother Nature’s gifts she endured not knowingly
	Her love and compassion for every being expressed vividly
	The motherly affection throughout her life, greatest love is shown
	A Girl even as a toddler

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Date: 7/22/2013 11:38:00 AM
this is very, very nice. memories, ;}
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:14:00 AM
Good morning Manel, may God fill your day with his breath.
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Date: 7/10/2013 1:04:00 PM
Great work describing how it is when children are small..They start young playing their role as feminine or masculine..Your visits are encouraging..My husband is doing well after the surgery..I got a good night's rest last night..Sara
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Date: 7/10/2013 6:46:00 AM
This is very special Manel, I am off to read the next one.
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Date: 7/9/2013 5:22:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/9/2013 8:45:00 PM
Thank you Ravi,
Date: 7/9/2013 2:02:00 AM
- Pleased to read your beautiful poem Manel, thank you for visiting my poem today. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:58:00 AM
Hi Manel, a lovely poem ..tender and precious... I will check on the poet that is missing for you... what is his last name... The name looks familiar... is it that man with a tuxedo in his avatar.... just wondering... love... LINDA
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/9/2013 1:09:00 AM
Sorry he is Demetrios Trifiatis
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Manel Gunatillake
Date: 7/9/2013 1:07:00 AM
Thank you PD. His name is Demetrios. I didn't see his poem for 2 weeks.
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