Justin Bordner Poet Epic

Gothic Love Grind

I find you alone
in your favorite room of sorrow and suspense,
the woman I cherish more than victory or divine sense,
long untouched, you stare into a sonnet of romantic sadness,
supple shadows dress you in stubborn, gothic passion, a quiet finesse,
they know that I am the speed of your tears and the lover in your trance,
as I see what your heart has wept for, tender acceptance
I understand why my soul seeks your emotional opulence, 
with my powerful hands I hug those lonely, sexy shoulders of tired independence, 
knowing by the ease of your neck's pining tilt, by the searching gap of your starving lips
no longer are you startled by our love, no more will you deny the lust righteous,
gliding the backs of my fingers up under your smooth chin skin, beauty so generous,
I find you passion thrown,

I undo your bodice and your soft feminine flesh opens onto me
radiating craving that glorifies yearning,
I entreat you to grab my hard affection, to feel the firm rush replete
to place the head of my love within you like a heavy heartbeat,
you obey with unquestioning need, eyes alight, thighs wide
I lunge in deeply, completely, pushing through you a pleasure tide
as you breathe in the handsome shock of your fulfillment
I kiss the soft space inbetween your sumptuous breasts and taste wild wonderment -

J.A.B.

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis March 5, 2015 at 1:24 PM Wow! what magnificently penned romantic piece. I delighted in each flow of words, similar to your patient hands crafting... Justin Bordner March 6, 2015 at 8:19 PM My hands craft patiently because that believe in the instruction from my heart...my heart believes in the endurance of our love Iris...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 26, 2015 at 11:44 AM a breathing passionate write.. the ardor that kicks in every line.. :) wow!!! love and desire to tge max!! Justin Bordner February 28, 2015 at 7:22 PM She and I belive in our pain, which is why we can allow our love to live, to dare everything that warns us Olive...your reaction is is a real kickstart of passion! J.A.B.

Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 12:50 PM I thought the last one I read was good, this is even better! You know how to sculpt your words into trancenent pleasure. Justin Bordner February 7, 2015 at 7:37 PM As with all Artists, and lovers, I unite with my inspiration...knowing her tender intricacies and working her thoroughly, as she transforms me into a savage angel...she is my Love Muse...my pure woman Richard. Thank you very much. J.A.B.

Darkland Poetry February 2, 2015 at 1:14 AM Wow...this is...HOT. I think I need a cigarette now. Lol Justin Bordner February 2, 2015 at 3:48 AM A love smoke is always good Rachel...studies show that nicotine has neuro biological benefits...life shows that love is awesome...J.A.B.

Kp Nunez January 31, 2015 at 3:16 AM Gripping, frank and proudly unashamed depiction of love and lust. As the story unfolds one is no longer surprised of the ending...tenderly sweet. Congratulations! Kim;) Justin Bordner February 1, 2015 at 8:29 PM The love she and I harvest always breathes with natural suprise Kim...unashamed, gosh, we are too true to feel shame...thanks for the support my friend. J.A.B.

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2015 at 2:39 AM A wonderful read Justin. So much in every line. :) PD Justin Bordner January 31, 2015 at 3:33 AM We give eachother so very much...when she cries I calm, when I hurt she hugs and holds me...when pain needs a reason we kiss, when passion explodes we create...love is magic my Sphinx...J.A.B.

Poesy Relish January 30, 2015 at 10:48 PM I am the speed of your tears....sonnet of romantic saddness... loved the way you expressed the emotional state of the woman in the first stanza and the wanton need full of passion in the second... congrats on being selected POTD... Nads! Justin Bordner February 1, 2015 at 8:46 PM Nadiya...you understand the balance of this romance...her emotions, my caring caress...her passion...our salvation...looking forward to reading your poetry Nadiya...J.A.B.

Meg Anderson January 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM Oh my... Well I guess there is a reason you are the poem of the day! Congrats! Your poems are always sinful and delicious! Justin Bordner February 1, 2015 at 8:53 PM She and I have never stopped to wonder if our emotions, lust and love are acceptable...we trust our hearts...and we challenge eachother to grow. I'm happy that you enjoyed the flavor of this true passion Megan...J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2015 at 12:48 PM - A deep and true love poem,Justin - Glad I found this on the p.o.t.d. page - Congratulations !! - // Anne-Lise :) Justin Bordner January 30, 2015 at 8:38 PM In every way Anne...in every way...thank you...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian January 30, 2015 at 10:49 AM And....here you are!!!! I'm so so proud of you, Justin! :) :) :) This poem...the inspiration behind it....every line....a beauty. You are a great writer....This poem is a handsome shock of fulfillment for the taste of sensual poetry! Justin Bordner January 30, 2015 at 8:32 PM So thrilled to put a shockwave through your heart Eileen! Inspiration...divine love prevailing over the chaos of pessimism. Your compliment keeps me highly motivated like an Eagle knowing his course to majesty...Your cheer feels so good upon my wings Beloved Poetess...J.A.B.

Jean Omalley Polatnick January 30, 2015 at 9:25 AM WOW ... EXCEPTIONAL! Congrats! Justin Bordner January 30, 2015 at 8:33 PM Thank you feeling the WOW of this romance Jean...J.A.B.

David Meade January 30, 2015 at 8:03 AM Congrats Justin -- you rock!! Justin Bordner January 30, 2015 at 8:18 PM Yeah David...our love is intense...it rocks...and it thunders! Thanks! J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal January 29, 2015 at 5:04 PM You already know that I adore this poem, its engagingly gothic theme, and its potent imagery. Your sensuality given to the soul and body of this woman is gallant, fulfilling, but most of all it is healing to her. Your healing nature is evident in all of your poetry, and we as readers and passionate poets are lucky to have the opportunity to share in your soul-fermented art. How one must be joyous from the sorrows that draw us together…a gothic romance to celebrate, appreciate, and emulate—so awesome! Such heart in this poem, Justin. A treasured favorite from beginning to end…Always, Laura Justin Bordner January 30, 2015 at 3:29 AM Your impassioned reception of this romance of shared sorrow, and strengthened affection, of indefatigable need is a kiss to my soul Laura. Your comments put water of purpose in my eyes...thank you so much...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal January 29, 2015 at 5:04 PM Oh, Justin….you offer such tender, heartwarming input to those who need it most, and then you return with such exquisite, passionate output- this newest poem of yours is a dream one does not want to wake up to! This is serious, meticulous affection, ignited by the need to fulfill another from their sorrows, and the stubborn shadows that they wear to hide, to mystify, and to intentionally-or even unintentionally- entrance. Justin Bordner January 30, 2015 at 1:35 AM There is a beautiful continuity to your thoughts of what it means to love...to embrace the righteous balance of two souls living to understand why they must have someone special in their heart...someone who subdues weakness and kisses their talents and gifts Laura...J.A.B. Laura Breidenthal January 29, 2015 at 5:10 PM Sorry these comments are all mixed up >...< heehee

Laura Breidenthal January 29, 2015 at 5:03 PM “with my powerful hands I hug those lonely, sexy shoulders of tired independence, knowing by the ease of your neck's pining tilt, by the searching gap of your starving lips no longer are you startled by our love, no more will you deny the lust righteous” –again, such powerful imagery and fondness; those lines I love, as well as “I undo your bodice and your soft feminine flesh opens onto me radiating craving that glorifies yearning”. She is your victory, a shareholder of your divine sense. Justin Bordner January 29, 2015 at 8:47 PM Absolutely Laura, she is my partner in epic passion...yes Laura...those lines of trusting, sympathetic companionship are graduating into sexual enlightenment...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal January 29, 2015 at 5:03 PM “the woman I cherish more than victory or divine sense, long untouched, you stare into a sonnet of romantic sadness, supple shadows dress you in stubborn, gothic passion, a quiet finesse….I understand why my soul seeks your emotional opulence….” Such a gem of a soul such as your own, to be drawn to hers, is a tender story ending with completion. Such emotion cannot be ignored by the one who seeks to heal, strengthen and enlighten. Justin Bordner January 30, 2015 at 1:27 AM That is indeed the prevailing touch of this poem, and our love, to heal one another with our unique qualities, and we challenge eachother with resolute fierceness Laura...we really complete eachother...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal January 29, 2015 at 5:01 PM “they know that I am the speed of your tears and the lover in your trance, as I see what your heart has wept for, tender acceptance” Shadows play their part in the light, though they do not stand a chance, for your understanding of this woman’s pain is profound…I like how you undress her from these shadowy garments she wears heavily upon herself, and freeing her through your compassionate love. Justin Bordner January 29, 2015 at 8:42 PM Laura, her naked heart need not hide in my arms of love...her needs are liberated in my fascinated passion...you always find the love pivot Poetess...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop January 29, 2015 at 10:41 AM Lonely sexy shoulders of tired independence/I am the speed of ypir tears and the lover in your trance/my soul seeks your emotional opulence/that favourite room of sorrow and suspense-I am sure you'll give her an upgrade from her favourite room to your favourite of loving her..So many exceptional lines..Can feel so many emotive lines-adding you to my fav poets..though you ve been there for quite awhile,since I first read your powerful words!Charma Justin Bordner January 29, 2015 at 8:29 PM It is always an honor when when another writer, another heart explorer quotes lines...the lines you've chosen to embrace bespeak your need to trust the shelter of a lover's adoration, to feel faith in his kiss, to find truth in his arms of worship...We have upgraded eachothers desire Charma...we are in eachothers FAV. FILE because we feel the poetry of Love...J.A.B.

David Meade January 29, 2015 at 9:46 AM Your words are filled with love and passion and when you unite them together . . . two lovers, two hearts become one! Outstanding. Justin Bordner January 29, 2015 at 1:31 PM She and I are the perfect firestorm of love David, when we unite passion has no rules...thank you David. J.A.B.