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Gothic Girls Don'T Roller Skate

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When I was a kid I liked to skate fast Not on frozen ice But on roller skates Down a great big hill We were a group Of skating kids I had pink wheels My friend had blue A steep hill Oh delight We just went Faster Faster Down ! When I was grown up And so dignified I wanted to skate Not on frozen ice But on roller skates The hill looked steep My courage gone Took off the skates Oh forever Falling fear Speeding fear Crash for sure See girls Gothic Watch ! _____________________________ February 17, 2016 Poetry/Diminished Hexaverse /Gothic Girls Don't Roller Skate Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-812-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Two Lenses sponsor, Sara Kendrick First Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2016 4:19:00 PM

Anytime

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2016 4:58:00 AM

Nice win

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2016 3:27:00 PM

Linda, thanks for visiting with the nice !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/29/2016 8:19:00 AM

Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara

Constance La France
Date: 2/29/2016 8:47:00 AM

Sara, thanks so much for that fun contest, and for my placement, so honored ~

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/28/2016 4:06:00 AM

The high rise followed by the irreversible slow down is picturesque in the poem. Congratulations....

Constance La France
Date: 2/28/2016 9:48:00 AM

Probir, thanks for visiting with the nice comment and the congratulations !

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 2/27/2016 10:34:00 PM

Wonderful write , Constance. Enjoyed the flashback. Hugs, Bobby

Constance La France
Date: 2/28/2016 9:48:00 AM

Bobby, thanks for the wonderful and the hugs !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2016 12:57:00 PM

Cute one..The Goths have it..I am glad that you entered my contest..Sara

Constance La France
Date: 2/27/2016 5:18:00 PM

Sara, thanks for hosting a fun contest and I appreciate my placement very much...

Susan Gentry

Date: 2/27/2016 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! I was a roller skater too, great memories. Enjoyed this.

Constance La France
Date: 2/27/2016 5:19:00 PM

Susan , thanks for visiting with congratulations, I was a great roller skater as a kid, but not so good as a gothic girl... lol

James Inman

Date: 2/19/2016 4:01:00 PM

Those long ago days when nothing could hurt us, then we grow up and understand the realities of life. There is a lot of pain out there and the fear can be overwhelming.

Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 5:40:00 PM

James, thanks for visiting, yes when we are kids we feel indestructible, after a few broken bones, we start to think... aaaah, maybe not... any ways I have terrible balance now...