Paloma P Poet Imagism

Gossamer Labyrinths' Agone Opulence

Once agone moments in time
        she was poetry in motion,
   'til she pirouetted herself
         onto dusty versed shelves
     midst old clouded rhymes
          & recollected love notes
yet, there lingered echoes
  glistening 'tween strands
   of web's interlacing design,
meshing her finessed
     past within gossamer's
      complexed entanglements
        beyond labyrinths of 
             anciently grand symphonies
she dances, still ~
  silently in her head
flirting with destiny
              albeit, not quite as opulently

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Carolyn Fish January 14, 2017 at 8:04 AM Good write

Doug Vinson December 15, 2016 at 11:02 PM A continuous, great trip, the title becoming true by the ending.

Charlie Smith December 15, 2016 at 10:45 PM Now that's stunning! Well done Paloma...

Chris Green December 15, 2016 at 11:45 AM Put on a shelf between books titled, "Who I will be" and "Who I became" still trying to fill the void and answer the question where did it go. Dusty or not, top shelf, out of sight, still the day may come where someone reaches high, takes it down, dusts it off and say...just what I have been looking for. Sad Paloma but nicely expressed.

Heidi Sands December 15, 2016 at 10:48 AM I love this one Paloma. I like anciently grand symphonies - She dances, still

Lim'Rik Flats December 15, 2016 at 10:07 AM Oh my petunia'd patinas! Such wowrific, wahwondrous weavings and twine twirled tarnishments zpeak zillions of zinnias! Opulence pales perspicaciously. Thanks for the jump start this morning;-) ~ j

Kim Rodrigues December 15, 2016 at 9:59 AM A vivid picture to reel in! Nice, Paloma!

Daniel Turner December 15, 2016 at 9:34 AM Age changes many things but it is a reality. Woulda, coulda, shoulda, right? I love this one, Paloma. Paloma P December 15, 2016 at 9:37 AM A damn harsh reality Danny, when I was 20 I couldn't picture 30, at 30, well you know the drill, enough of that. :) Arigato.

Darren White December 15, 2016 at 9:33 AM I entangled myself a week ago (more or less) and it's hard to find the way back :) Paloma P December 15, 2016 at 9:35 AM You will, I have faith in you! :)