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The excited Children passing in queue Halted near the Gorilla in the zoo As they kept looking on It did an act wanton- Hurled at them something dark, it was his poo Syllable count....10,10,6,6,10 Dec.22.2022

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Date: 1/6/2023 8:05:00 AM
Lolol I imagine half would be laughing and the other half running in horror. Thanks for the smile Valsa :)
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Date: 12/29/2022 8:51:00 PM
Ah ah... A great limerick lady. May the New Year bless you with health, wealth, and happiness
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Date: 12/23/2022 8:30:00 AM
Oh poor kids but they certainly had a story to tell their parents and friends, poo thrown at zoo. I really had a laugh after I read the last line! Sure this will rate high in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 12/22/2022 7:39:00 PM
The children went through a terrible ordeal. Inventive work entered into a contest. Best wishes for the contest dear friend, Valsa.
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Date: 12/22/2022 7:26:00 PM
Oh, my! Next time let those kids ask for some 'gorilla glue.' ~ Pooh-pooh
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Date: 12/22/2022 10:23:00 AM
HA. I like how you did your poo poem. I did a similar one about monkey at the zoo several weeks ago. I hear that these animals love doing this funny activity to zoo guests
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Date: 12/22/2022 5:44:00 AM
Yup…they do that. LOL
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Date: 12/22/2022 5:13:00 AM
Sad experience for the children. Creative work for a contest, I guess. Way to go. I am glad I was not there. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/22/2022 1:49:00 AM
They will need a thorough bath.
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Date: 12/21/2022 11:35:00 PM
Lol, hope they brought some wipes with them yuck. Tom
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