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Goosies

Goosies Jennifer Lopez gets them a lot when she listens to singers on American Idol. Perhaps it happened to me a few times, but I can’t recall the specific time that a song gave me the goosies. Those crazy little pimples above which the hairs stand erect most usually on our arms occur when people are moved by things: music, dance, emotions. Also things that creep us out or give us great fear can give us the chills or goosebumps. My mother used to say, “When you get a sudden chill for no specific reason, it means that someone just walked over your grave.” That happened for me just a couple of times. Maybe my future burial spot is a little bit remote! As I think and think about it, I can recall at least one time this strange phenomenon known as goosebumps caused not just my arms, but nearly my entire body, to resemble that of a plucked bird! It was back in ‘74 and I was with a small group of students visiting the coast of the Mediterranean Sea off Spain’s beautiful Valencia. It was late winter (or perhaps very early spring). All my life I wanted to say I had swum in a sea far from America! Though the temperature was extremely cold for swimming, I dared myself to venture out into the Mediterraean that day. As the others in my group dared only to poke their toes into the ice-cold water, I submerged my entire body. What a shock it was! Nevertheless, for at least twenty minutes, I lay on my back, letting my body float and float, drifting with the tide while making sure to keep close by the shore. When I noticed the group was wanting to leave, I swam back. As I sat in the bus with a towel wrapped around me, I shivered uncontrollably and my skin puckered up as the hairs rose up on both my legs and arms. I had been foolish that day, but I felt proud to say I had swum in the Mediterranean Sea. Nov. 14, 2019 for the 'Goosebumps' Poetry Contest of Delilah Ventura

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Date: 12/14/2019 1:00:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Andrea
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Date: 12/14/2019 12:46:00 PM
I knew this one would make the premier list Andrea. Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 11/23/2019 9:17:00 AM
I think I'll just wait for something to amaze me and give them to me. I've always thought people were crazy as Loons to do those polar plunges. :) <3 lol But, nice story you got from your youthful exuberance though. :) lol :) <3
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Date: 11/17/2019 1:50:00 AM
Wow! A wonderful adventure you will never forget. My body can't handle cold water. One time I tried to swim in Mexico's Baja peninsula and my legs instantly cramped so badly I almost couldn't leave the water by myself. I think you were really brave to do that. I enjoyed your entry Andrea. : ) xxoo
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Date: 11/16/2019 10:10:00 PM
That was quite an adventure, Very nicely penned Andrea..GL in the contest..
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Date: 11/16/2019 5:44:00 PM
Great penning Andrea, love the story within this poem...i get goosebumps often... you were brave to venture in the cold ocean, but youth has much less fear then adults... hugs :)
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Date: 11/16/2019 3:15:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, You penned such a well written and engaging write. Good descriptions on goosebumps and what causes them. I didn't expect the twist at the end, I thought you got goosebumps because something frightened you. So I just assumed you came across "Jaws" while swimming in the ocean. This is a winner in my book. I hope the sponsor feels the same way. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your weekend my friend:-)
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Date: 11/15/2019 6:03:00 PM
Hi Andrea: And obscure but great subject and we both felt the same way swimming in the Mediterranean Sea. Hugs Ralph
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Date: 11/15/2019 5:35:00 PM
That must have been very memorable for you. Now I know what you mean about something common. That brings me goosebumps just thinking about jumping into the cold water you described.
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Date: 11/15/2019 3:16:00 PM
We have all gotten them at some time of our lives or other, swimming the Mediterranean see is no easy fiat, neither is a poem well done . You've aced it Andrea, gl. in the contest
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Date: 11/14/2019 10:43:00 PM
Andrea, I like the poem. I never knew the Med was ever so cold. -Richard
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Date: 11/14/2019 1:11:00 PM
Nice "slice of life" here. You may want to submit poetry to Voices Israel newsletter. They are no getting much work from outside the Holy Land and you do not have to be Jewish to post your work there, Why not send them a poem? You are the most prolific I know. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/14/2019 10:24:00 AM
Love this, Andrea! Most likely the top winner! I have goosebumps. Your brave and daring venture. Aren’t we all fools in our youth. My husband (not at the time) dared me to jump into a cold pool. I did it! But he wouldn’t come in....lol! I’m sure I impressed him with my daring and likewise he would push me outside my comfort zone again and again. <3 Kim xx
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Date: 11/14/2019 6:50:00 AM
Love this but would never have been able to do what you did - I can't stand the cold water that long. But, glad you did it. Blessings and best in the contest, Gina
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Date: 11/14/2019 6:25:00 AM
As soon as I heard "goosies" my thought was Jennifer Lopez as she is the only person I have ever heard use that term. Sweet write, Andrea.
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