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Goody-Goody

goody, goody what's in the bag? remains of your life i now have goody goody it was pointless to offer your life to work and focus goody goody your skin will melt the last number on the clock stops at twelve my history was a part of me they all seemed to under-think my earliest abilities of lethal thoughts and troubled schemes Your breath is about to be revoked now i've got us both alone... the weight of the knife against your frail throat fulfilling it's sweet tooth perfusing your sad wails no one but us exists within these walls gagging and struggling i catch you for your last fall my shirt isn't drenched enough the blade isn't dull enough out your wrists escapes all of the good stuff desperation mutilation pools of crimson who would have thought of this? who would have gone through with it? back on schedule time for studies too bad i was caught for being bloody i wasn't in it for the money i was thirsty for the running of your delicious tears your sobbing i've succeeded the souls disembodied you were right i am heavy but now from the burden of your body... goody goody two shoes belittle me and i will haunt you goody goody two shoes no more running for you i am sorry, i am sorry i am sorry, i am sorry i am sorry, i am sorry i'm so sorry... Scare Me Good contest September 28, 2016

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Date: 10/19/2016 6:46:00 PM
Well done and congrats on your placement
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:34:00 AM
Agony- wonderful write you have here...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/7/2016 10:11:00 AM
You've let us see through the eyes of a deeply disturbed mind AA, well done.
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James Inman
Date: 10/7/2016 10:18:00 AM
Just read about Sasebo slashing, you captured it well.
Date: 10/7/2016 8:13:00 AM
A lot of frightening potential here -- open to a myriad of interpretations. Why is scary so hard to come by? Congrats, Agony! :-)
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Agony Aiane
Date: 10/7/2016 9:34:00 AM
This was actually inspired by Sasebo slashing, which I probably should have mentioned to begin with. Thank you, though. Have a suitable day! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sasebo_slashing

Book: Shattered Sighs