Goodnight Soupers - For Chris Green

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(With thanks to Lou Reed, who inspired the title and refrain)

"Goodnight Soupers, Soupers Goodnight
    Time for Chris to say Goodbye"

From the very early morning
When the sun still fights the moon
He will sit to write his lyrics
To be posted very soon

With a cup of coffee waiting
And a notepad filled with Soup
Tangerine skies out the window
And his thoughts run in a loop

"Morning Soupers
I slept well
You're still sleepy
I can tell"

Through the day he writes his comments
So supportive to us all
In between his own great writing
A poetic waterfall

When his evening rest is nearing
He writes us all a lullabye
And when for once he doesn't
In the silence we all cry

    "Goodnight Soupers, Soupers Goodnight
    Time for Chris to say Goodbye"

Don't forget us on your Wednesday
Or we all are gonna cry
Now goodnight Chris and sleep well friend
Here's for once YOUR lullabye

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March 1, 2017
© Darren White

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/17/2017 10:12:00 PM
ZAAAAA! My ! of delight! Stupendous write Piroet ;) xomo! seVen
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Darren White
Date: 4/17/2017 11:52:00 PM
Fun, yes? Thanks ma mo :)
Date: 3/1/2017 9:45:00 PM
So beautifully expressed as only you can Darren!
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Darren White
Date: 3/1/2017 10:52:00 PM
Thank you Arthur :)
Date: 3/1/2017 6:22:00 AM
Darren, my good friend, this is the best good night poem ever. Your talent for writing is only surpassed by your compassion and friendship, the friendship that you show to everyone on this site. Knowing the physical hardships you face, it always amazes me how you take your precious time and give it to others. Thank you my friend, you are a special human being and I am happy that I can call you friend. I am humbled by this poetic gesture. Oh...good morning. :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/1/2017 6:30:00 AM
Good morning Chris :) I am very happy you like my poem \o/ And I am even more happy you're my friend.
Date: 3/1/2017 5:57:00 AM
Dear Darren I noticed this entry by the title as I was scrolling down the page. I've only been a member here since the 20th of February however I have come to admire not only your work and talent but yes the talent of Chris. This is a fabulous tribute to him and his work not to mention his good morning and good nights. May he and you keep posting your skilled work. Well done
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Darren White
Date: 3/1/2017 6:02:00 AM
Dear Lisa, ever since I saw that cute blue bird appearing, I have enjoyed your poetry and comments :) I hope Chris will like his poem when he wakes up in a little bit.
Date: 3/1/2017 1:31:00 AM
what a lovely tribute Darren I love to wake up and go to sleep with Chris ... his poetry I mean lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 3/1/2017 1:33:00 AM
LOL Jan, and I think more of us do hahaha
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