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Goodnight My Love

A silent crimson sunset farewell. The final light before the dawn. Its crimson blush lights heaven's door. I feel you, can you feel me some how? I miss you so much it hurts, my love, But I know we'll be together once again. Until then, you're always in my heart. It's time to sleep, my dreams awaits Of crimson blush lighting heaven's door. Goodnight my love, Goodnight.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 9:55:00 PM

Connie, I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/21/2013 3:59:00 PM

Thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Skat A

Date: 5/19/2013 9:28:00 PM

CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/20/2013 10:24:00 AM

Tha. You for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/15/2013 10:54:00 AM

- Thank you for this delightful poem Connie, romantic and sweet .... love it! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/15/2013 7:47:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely commenting. Much appreciated. Have a great evening. Warm Smiles, Connie

Betty Bateson

Date: 5/14/2013 12:01:00 PM

Beautifully written. Good luck. Betty

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/14/2013 12:31:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/14/2013 2:15:00 AM

Beautiful Poem Connie *hugs* P.S. Thank You for your wonderful comments :)

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/14/2013 12:33:00 PM

Thank you Sasha for your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2013 10:32:00 PM

this is a sweet poem and very pretty one for the challenge.

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/14/2013 12:34:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your lovely comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Len Gasun

Date: 5/13/2013 4:56:00 PM

A very beautiful and romantic poem my dear friend Connie! I love it so much and the way you took the theme. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! Good luck in the contest. Thank you so much as well for your kind visit and your congratulatory comments. Belated congrats on your wins too. Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/14/2013 12:35:00 PM

Leonora thank you for your wonderful comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/13/2013 3:31:00 PM

This is an ingenious write, a tremendous poem my friend! I truly loved reading this incredible piece the afternoon! I love your analogy you used between the crimson sky and blush, a wonderful link! What a delightful poem Connie, Great Work!!

Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/14/2013 12:38:00 PM

Thank you russell for stopping and reading Crimson Sky. A wonderful comment you left me . It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie