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My sparkle is dwindling away, I am just scouring the edge lay, Launching the vigor to praying, Like a dream on this olden day. Whimsical at loads is bursting. Nirvana seeps his crux meeting. He grasped dictum obfuscation. Scrawled on my ego beguiling Thus burst in shards of vexation I posit soothing deception. Recognized by a focused gaze Mind that is field to rendition. Lethargic shifts ruined surprise. Mental pathway like a sheet maze Despite bold blowing of the wind. This is faithful blithe for God praise. In shackle of land dreaming bind. Sounds genuine usurped by pride. illusion bubble with worry. Is it true to goodness we're blind?
2nd Place contest winner Written: May 13, 2022 Bubble of illusion Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 5/21/2022 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/21/2022 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Creative" write and beautiful picture. Wish I was walking the beach. Have a blessed weekend writing away....................
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Date: 5/20/2022 8:12:00 PM
Deep inquiry! Congrats on your win, Sotto
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Date: 5/14/2022 3:37:00 AM
Man must be humble, that is obeying God.
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Date: 5/13/2022 2:44:00 PM
Perhaps we take for granted goodness. Bubble of illusion bursts eventually.
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