Goodbye Then

Goodbye then. 

We have closed the book and 
replaced it on the shelf. 
Dog eared pages straightened. 
Tens of thousands of words 
read, spoken, stored for posterity. 

Goodbye then. 

No longer a working title, 
but an archive which will 
gather dust in the annals of time. 
Maybe one day to be discovered, 
like some ancient tomb. 

Goodbye then. 

Remember when we began the story? 
The newness, the excitement and 
anticipation at what would unfold. 
Spellbound by adventure, mesmerized 
by speculation as each word became exposed. 

Goodbye then. 

All done.  Story complete. 
No more surprises, just the 
anticlimax of finality. 
The eerie silence of conclusion. 
A lingering pause, one last look, a smile - 

The end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mason Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 11:43 AM
Well, that pretty much sums it up ... smile ... great analogy using a book and the story many of us can tell ... excellent writing here, Helen !!
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January 12, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Congrats Helen on the feature. Ending to a love story beautifully written. Vince
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January 11, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Helen >> James
George   Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:34 AM
it is like saying goodbye to a very dear friend. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with me, Helen. Lainie
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January 11, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Helen. Love, Carol
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January 10, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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January 10, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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