Goodbye, Hello

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5/26/2026 for Song II - Breaking Benjamin - Far Away - with Scooter Ward Poetry Contest sponsored by Rob Carmack

My family It's time to fly And so, I know I'll say goodbye My dear beloved While I did try My love I know I'll say goodbye All that is fine I don't know why Must always go I'll say goodbye As fire and flames Reign from the sky Far down below I'll say goodbye And while I say It's time to die I'll say hello You'll say goodbye

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Jacqueline R. Mendoza

Date: 5/26/2025 3:03:00 PM

Hi David, It's Jac short for my real name, Jacqueline. My Jackie was a bad girl so that there's a Jac in girls. Wow the Rhyming made me want to write poetry. I've been sharing the world of Eternal God for people because it's good for the soul. I forgot how to write poems & I'm just getting back to it. I hope u visit my poetrysoup poem page and hopefully comment on some, thanks

David Crandall
Date: 5/26/2025 3:15:00 PM

I find it's fun to write poems, though, I can't say I know how - lol. I'll take a look.