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Goodbye and Hello

hello I know you don’t know me but I’d like to give you your stuff back I think you use to love me in fact I know you did but you don’t remember me we meet a while back it was like love at first sight but as soon as things started.. they started closeting in on us we could have made it or at least that’s what I think but you weren’t honest so everything fell one person cant do this on there on I needed help and you were never there you told me to go just leave and don’t come running back you said” I don’t need you" and as time grew so did we we grew apart form each other my mind is a wide as an ocean and my thoughts come rushing in like tides my eyes shine like the glow form the moon and when I opened my eyes I could see everything so I left and I never thought about coming back I don’t need your lies your love or your heart I never had it in the start so threes no reason for me to fight for it now and now that I’ve found you I’d like to say hello, I know you don’t know me but I’d like to give you this all your memories’ all your false hope of one day marring you I hope your remember me while I forget you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2010 2:27:00 AM
"I know you don't know me" - is a brilliant line and i really enjoyed reading this poem. Best of luck- Paul
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:19:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Brooke. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:03:00 AM
This is a very oxymoronic piece. I like the consistency of the theme. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/31/2010 4:14:00 PM
Yes good for you Girl, nice flow love the way you handle the words in your poetry. Pretty cool for staying on top of the game,..p.d.
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:54:00 PM
thank you for the comments i agree with the adivce and im going to work on my writting thanks again!! really glad you all took the time to read this (:
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Date: 5/30/2010 8:15:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup Family .. enjoyed your very cretive write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:49:00 AM
Well expressions emotions and sentiments of love
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Date: 5/30/2010 1:48:00 AM
Hello Brooke, I know you don't know me, but I'd like to say "Good for you girl!" You express your feelings well, and I love your feisty attitude. There are many good things about this poem, you just need to pay a little more attention to detail, use the spell-checker when you post your poem. There are quite a few places where you've caught two keys at once, or typed two letters the wrong way round. It's worth spending the time to correct them, it will definitely improve the quality of the read.
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:34:00 AM
emotions well expressed, although u should check ur spellings, apart from that i enjoyed reading it, cheers oscar \m/
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