Goodbye

Gone are the summer days
 Golden leaves shedding tears
  Gust of wind swiped them all
   Gloomy are mute flowers 
    Grieving are the bare trees 
     Glow of my garden lost
      Gate of life closed so soon


14 Dec, 2016.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Merryman Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:23 PM
Lovely imagery describing the end of summer, Meenakshi! Congrats on your placement! Blessings, Kim
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:32 PM
Lovely, yet sad Pleiades, Meenakshi..congrats on your win :)
Stebbings Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Lovely picture of late summer fading, Meenakshi. // Barry
Raina Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Thank you...
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 1:57 PM
Excellent Meenakshi. I love it:)
Raina Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Thank You Daniel...
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