Goodbye

Goodbye G one are the days of my never ending solitude O vercast shadows, dissipate with my newfound mood O bvious to all, my heart and soul are all yours D estiny has infused your fragrance into my pores B eauty is internal, not what's seen with the eyes Y our essence has consumed me, and finally I realize E cstasy has taken over, and to sadness I say goodbye For Rick Parise contest 7 lines September 28,2016

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/30/2016 4:12:00 AM

I like the positivity of your goodbye, John; great acrostic:) congratulations on your win in Nayda's contest:)

John Hamilton
Date: 9/30/2016 8:28:00 AM

Thanks Jo

The Grahamburglar

Date: 9/29/2016 4:54:00 PM

I love the contrast between the acrostic of goodbye and the content of a new beginning. Very clever, and nicely written.

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2016 6:34:00 PM

Thanks Graham nice to hear from you, I respect your work and positive feedback from you is an honor.Thanks again

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/29/2016 12:44:00 PM

If goodbyes were like this one then there wouldn't be any goodbyes dear John! A seven!

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2016 1:52:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/29/2016 9:09:00 AM

This is perfect, goodbye has never been sweeter.

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thanks Richard nice to hear from you! Have a great day!

Lu Loo

Date: 9/29/2016 9:06:00 AM

lovely acrostic John, you know I always love rhyming acrostics! :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thanks Laura

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 9/29/2016 7:30:00 AM

Congratulations John on the placement of the contest. Memories can still in your mind after had you said goodbye.

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2016 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Nayda

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/28/2016 11:41:00 PM

Ends on such a positive note. Inspiring! Congrats :)

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2016 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Sunita

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/28/2016 11:32:00 PM

Hi John, This is a well written acrostic. I'm glad ecstasy has taken over and you were able to say goodbye to sadness. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

John Hamilton
Date: 9/29/2016 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Alexis

Paul Callus

Date: 9/28/2016 1:31:00 PM

This is a beautiful acrostic! Initially I expected a sad poem, but I was proved wrong, John! Pleased to find out that it is goodbye to solitude and sadness! Full marks to you. ~ Regards // paul

John Hamilton
Date: 9/28/2016 2:01:00 PM

Thanks Paul, sometimes they just flow, and write themselves you know! Much appreciated your positive feedback.