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Goodbye There is no good in “Good bye,” only a finality and a cry. A parting of “See you soon,” is much friendlier a tune. There is no good in “Goodbye,” only someone wondering why. Let's say we'll meet in a while, and leave a reassuring smile. There is no good in “Goodbye.” Just a notion to jump and fly. With a wave, you are gone. It's tantamont to, “So long.” There is no good in “Goodbye.” We will meet again, do try? Drop the bye leave the good, and say “Later” if you would. 9/27/16 For contest 240 Brian Strand, Sponsor

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Date: 9/29/2016 8:57:00 PM
Wonderful job. I see it won the contest. Congratulations!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/30/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thanks, blessings Janis
Date: 9/29/2016 9:05:00 AM
beautiful Janis- loved this one because there really is no good in goodbye...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 5:01:00 PM
yes, why do we say it so much. Thanks.
Date: 9/29/2016 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations Janis on the placement of the contest. A goodbye can be say without any tear.
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Date: 9/29/2016 5:03:00 PM
Thanks, Nayda. another challenging contest. Good.
Date: 9/28/2016 11:27:00 PM
Hi Janis, What good entry for the contest. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 9/29/2016 5:06:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Alexis. Blessings, Janis
Date: 9/28/2016 7:52:00 AM
A frisky and perky write - all enjoyable - a sad subject made upbeat. A wonderful read, Janis ... CayCay
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Date: 9/28/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thanks for all your comments today. They have been very uplifting and encouraging. Thanks also for taking the time to stop by. Blessings, Janis
Date: 9/28/2016 2:26:00 AM
Hey Janis, really liked your poem Great lines in here. Regards, Craig
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Date: 9/28/2016 3:53:00 PM
Thanks Craig. I appreciate you stopping by. Blessings, Janis
Date: 9/27/2016 11:59:00 PM
A nice poem indeed ... and I agree too ...
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Date: 9/28/2016 3:55:00 PM
Hi, Probir. Always good to see your face on my page or your name on a winner's list. Thanks.

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