Goodbye

I.

I waited again for you, until sunset,
You had promised, you would come,
Abandoned sea and cloudless sky,
Was a perfect day to spend together.

Now I know you will never come,
For you I wrote, last goodbye on sand,
It too shall be washed by roaring tides,
And you will never know, I was there.

How shall I mute memories of you,
There aren't many but there are few,
Where do I mend my broken heart,
I wish we were together and not apart.

II.

I wasn't rich enough to be handsome,
Your father told me two days before,
Now I shall dwell in an unknown land,
But I kept my promise, visited the shore.

When you left, I gazed at the vacant sea,
I touched your goodbye, on wet sand,
You will never know, it wasn't the tide,
But me, who wiped it, with sorrow hand.



Feb 26, 2016.

Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever - Poetry Contest 
Contest entry: May 12, 2016.
Sponsored by: Broken Wings


Goodbye Contest 
Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:58 AM
oh so sadly beautiful Meenakshi...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Daniel Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:18 AM
This is really heartfelt, Meenakshi:) very beautiful:) Congratulations on your top win:)
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:52 AM
So very sad Meenakshi - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Hi Meenakshi, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Meenakshi, heartfelt poem congratulations on your win : ) Hugs Eve
Negron Flores Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Congratulations Meenakshi on the placement of the contest. Sea is the silent witness of many goodbyes.
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Greetings Meenakshi. Congrats on your placement with this deep, fine piece!! ;-)
Palli Avatar
May 17, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Congrats, Meenakshi. Great imagery and very emotional.
Chansarkar Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Sad, that is life!Congrats Meenakshi!
Haight Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Meenakshi, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever' contest. Very sad... Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 9:11 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Meenakshi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Davey Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Very sad but beautiful poem! congrats on your win
Ebbs Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 10:35 PM
You can only do what you can do and if its not enough, then its not enough. Someone will appreciate you for you. Good luck my friend...thank you for sharing.
Raina Avatar
February 26, 2016 at 11:53 PM
Thanks for the comments.
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