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Goodbye

Heart is broken, prayers are unanswered. Everything around me is crashing down. You said i was special but now im nothing but a faded dead memory. I thought you were different, I thought you were my best friend, but you showed your true colors and they are dark and sketchy. You said you would die for me but now you are the one killing me. tiny pieces of my heart around your feet your kicking them around like tiny pebbles. To you its goodbye i used to think your favorite words were me and you forever baby i promise. But we all know empty promises never follow through. I learned my lesson. So goodbye forever. Two bitter tasting words to say to you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/22/2011 12:42:00 PM
This poem is written from the deepest parts of your heart...so transparent and revealing of a disappointing relationship. So many of us can relate and feel empathy for this writer. You said u would die for me but now are the one killing me....super intense feelings expressed in this line. Thanks for sharing your gift of release. Gwendolen
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Lexus Gabriele
Date: 5/26/2011 8:22:00 AM
thanks :) it was a really crappy relationship but thanks
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Lexus Gabriele
Date: 5/26/2011 8:22:00 AM
thanks :) it was a really crappy relationship but thanks
Date: 5/22/2011 9:05:00 AM
Your poem is full of emotion and well written but has nothing to do with my contest about birds and will not be judged~~
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