Goodby Betty,Don'T Remember Me

My hands spade the shovel - spay the rooted grave.
Earth is impassive.  Why won’t life relent?
The silver blades south for the black plastic bag
swallowed by west winds, wrapped in a blanket
that is olive green.  Under the sun’s harrowing husk
I peel away the last bit of crust yet unpeeled.
Pink scab, raw, refusing to heal.  Dusk is dawn, hushed -
the garden takes back what the plate glass revealed.
There is no breeze now as I sit down to write
in my black plastic chair once taken from me
by a black plastic bag.  No peaceful leaves blow 
as I swallow remains of what remains of night
while the lumbering bough climbs down from a tree
and sees through the window a fragmented shadow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/23/2017 9:26:00 AM
My heart goes out to you, Phillip. Very heart touching sonnet, beautiful in its sadness:) a 7:)
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Date: 5/16/2017 1:27:00 PM
I don't know what to say, only that I love this small tribute and the love with which it is written. You'll remember her.
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Darren White
Date: 5/16/2017 2:09:00 PM
Don't be lazy and do it yourself! I'll sift through the redheads in the meantime.
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 5/16/2017 1:44:00 PM
Thank you - but stop reading my sappy crap and get back to earning that million dollar check for me. You Have redheads to rent
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