Good Wishes For You

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Dec. 28, 2023 8.36am

Whoever is throwing me coals, I’ll throw you back lots of sweet apples. Apples of my heartfelt wishes, With humility and forgiveness. I wish you’ll have the golden sunrise, To brighten your days, twice, thrice… I wish you great joy, hope and love, May God grant you peace from up above. I hope you’ll forgive me too, From my mistakes, I’m willing to grow. From that wall built between us, May current times of oblivion hit it, smash.

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Len Gasun

Date: 1/7/2024 8:14:00 AM

Good wishes for my enemy Contest Judged: 1/4/2024 3:09:00 AM Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon Place 2 (up to 4 multi-w)

Silent One

Date: 1/6/2024 2:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the forgiveness contest..you did it really well..

Len Gasun
Date: 1/7/2024 8:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet firend SO. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/4/2024 6:38:00 PM

"From that wall built between us, May current times of oblivion hit it, smash" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 1/7/2024 8:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Christuraj. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/4/2024 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this creative write. Your sweet apples is a great idea. Love This Write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away........................

Len Gasun
Date: 1/7/2024 8:15:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and I'm glad you've enjoyed and loved it my dear poet friend Paula. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 12/27/2023 10:22:00 PM

Awwn this is so sweet and so beautifully written i love the sincerity of your poetic voice and how you’ve especially written “ Apples of my heartfelt wishes, With humility and forgiveness.“ so beautiful and sweet! Soul warming read this is. I wish you everything you deserve today and always. Pleasure always reading you

Len Gasun
Date: 1/1/2024 8:22:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Ink for reading my poem, your uplifting words and best loving wishes. I wish you all the best too especially this New Year. Happy Happy New Year 2024 my dear poet friend! Hugs