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Good Vibrations

Beach boys on the boom box, surfing away Gran’s bored, California dreaming all day She’s drinking whiskey And feels quite frisky Climbs on her ironing board, next stop LA Limerick contest Sponsored by Lisa YY How many syllables checked 07/18/22

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Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2022 6:25:00 AM

and there you are - on the winning list with everyone else. lol Glad you made it in.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2022 6:38:00 AM

Made it by the skin of my teeth Jenna, thanks to your heads up and support, I’m delighted, cheers David

Terry Flood

Date: 7/19/2022 6:21:00 AM

I’ll be in LA, full of gin and arms wide spread… tell her I’m waiting. Congrats, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2022 6:35:00 AM

You seriously love these old grans Terry, and like yourself my penchant is G&T, me and whiskey don’t get along, cheers David

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/19/2022 5:01:00 AM

Fun one David: Congrats. Love The Beach Boys vibe here.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2022 6:06:00 AM

Thank you SuZ, I honestly struggled to come up with a theme, til the Beach Boys idea came from the blue, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/19/2022 12:37:00 AM

Missed this gem David, congrats on your win. It was only the other day I asked Alexa to play the beach boys that it came to mind and when I saw the pic it came together. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2022 12:56:00 AM

Thanks Tom, the picture itself sparked good vibrations, so I just went at it from that direction, and the beach boys theme took over, I’m delighted to get a placement, cheers David

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/18/2022 7:41:00 PM

David, I really like this. Imaginative and clever and funny as all get out.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2022 12:53:00 AM

Thank you Milton, it was the last entry for the contest, so I hadn’t got time to hang about, I’m delighted it turned out well, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/18/2022 6:58:00 PM

David, it must be the Irish Wiskey! Good vibes alright...it made me smile:) Congratulations on your win ~Anaya

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2022 12:50:00 AM

Heya Anaya, Some call Irish whiskey the madman’s drink, if you drink more than the recommended dose, I think gran had a few too many lol, cheers David

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/18/2022 6:31:00 PM

Very good David, a wonderful Gran although she’s rather risky… Belle

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2022 12:46:00 AM

Risky indeed, surfing on an ironing board when drunk, thank you Belle, cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/18/2022 3:33:00 PM

Go Granny Go. I'm glad you wrote another, David.

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 5:37:00 PM

I know of one another besides Tom, but at least you have an entry. No worries... it's a trivial thing in life.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/18/2022 4:05:00 PM

I’m just after visiting Toms page now, and spotted he had already written a beach boy theme, I had honestly no idea, but with a limited prompt to go on, there may be a few other entrants with similar ideas, Damn serendipity, cheers

Jenna Logan
Date: 7/18/2022 3:54:00 PM

She's got the spunk to do it. Wouldn't it be fun if you won with your new entry? ;)

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/18/2022 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Jenna, and for the heads up as well, hopefully gran makes it some of the way at least, cheers David