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Good Times

GOOD TIMES “Well old daver” I was saying to myself the other day “There have been a lot of good times A lot of good friends Talk Booze Sex Music and art Even some good rhyme” These days if I play a beautiful old theme A pop tune of old Symphony Salon favorite I used to play ages ago The tears well The tears will roll I am in paradise Or hell’s out- hole Looking through a photo album or old program The same – I choke Every bit of what is me or ever was me is in my throat I thought and thought Clutched Choked All these friends Talk Booze Music Great artists…….. Then it came to me As if a song ‘They are all dead and gone’ At first I gasped But then I laughed Mind-imaging…….. This country western swarthy looking guy Checkered shirt Wide-brim hat String tie Singing all the sentimental stuff To some wailing country western fiddle Yep! He’s singing my song – “I gasped Choked Damn near croaked Them folks and times is dead and gone”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2010 6:30:00 AM
don't choke!! enjoyed
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Date: 3/6/2010 5:51:00 PM
You're pulling me all over the dam rink with this one Daver. Quite a ride. Beautiful write, My friend, Beautiful write indeed. Big love right back at you. Robert
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Date: 3/5/2010 9:42:00 PM
Oh, so sad, Daver. YOu have lived a very long life and I know that it passes very very quickly and I'm not even where you are yet. I started getting these feelings about life after I hit 40. And it never gets better! Its when I focused on poetry too. I think poetry is our gift for having lived so much of life , both the good and the bad. Really enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/2/2010 3:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem today. I find your poem sad and funny at the same time. GREAT writting on your sentimental memories
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:36:00 PM
dare i say a wonderful memory. a picture of what heaven will look like when you get there. john
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:00:00 PM
Well, the synchronization with me and some Soup folks just continues to astound ... went to a wonderful memorial service today for another great person and its the second one this year so at one a month, I may lose 12 friends this year ... groan ... than again, they may all outlive me ... great writing here Daver and you've got Soup mail !!
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:45:00 PM
great job, thanks for the memories
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Date: 2/27/2010 5:08:00 PM
Hey Daver, in spite of it all, in spite of there absence, I am sure gratitude for the memories is present! I can tell by this excellent poem you've written straight from your dear heart! God bless. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/27/2010 2:16:00 PM
Dave-r..this made me laugh and cry at the same time. Good work my friend. BG
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Date: 2/27/2010 10:28:00 AM
This is very melancholy and nostalgic at the same time. Touched me, too...
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:06:00 AM
So nicely written, Daver. We all get a bit sentimental and as we age, we lose more and more of the special people in our lives. You touched my heart, you "old codger." Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:11:00 AM
I enjoyed that
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