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Good Place - Bad Place

When life is finally nearing an end By a system of points, we must contend Was life a success Performed my best More points mean a good life I've spent

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/7/2020 6:10:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, I think you won the prize. Enjoy your evening my friend. xxx=ooo
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/8/2020 8:30:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. xxxx-oooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2020 6:19:00 PM
What a sweet thing to say Miss Darlene! Thanks for the good words... love, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 5/7/2020 8:15:00 AM
No blackjack for Jack? Nah, you are innumerable. <3
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2020 8:32:00 AM
There ya go again, "no blackjack for jack"!!! LOL "innumerable" hummm not sure about that! However, just read Kirk Douglas just passed away at 103!!!!!! XOX
Date: 5/7/2020 6:16:00 AM
If we're in the top twenty we've done okay
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/7/2020 6:23:00 AM
Won't predict where I'll end up, but I'd hate to wind up at 21!!! LOL Happy day from Happy Jack

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