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From the groves of eucalyptus, Over the hills of Alpine trees, I bring for you, The smell of roses. With the shimmer of dew, A charming, enchanting dream. Sweet, shut your eyes, Nightingales singing on boughs, Fireflies hovering around the lamp post, For you I bring sleepy teddy bear, A charming, enchanting dream. Beloved eyes, goodnight, In the gentle moon's embrace, With twinkling stars as your companions, I tenderly lay my touch upon you, A gentle stroke of affection, A charming, enchanting dream.

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Date: 6/28/2023 5:15:00 PM
Jay I am not sure if this is classed as a nursery rhyme or a lullaby, but I am betting Eve Roper would love to have it her book. Its is so very beautiful..I think it should be framed as a gift for any new born baby girl. It is absoltely gorgeous. A Fave
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Date: 6/26/2023 2:25:00 PM
A very caring goodnight to someone you love and care for, Jay. I liked the repeated last line of each verse for emphasis. Write On! my friend. Bill
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Date: 6/26/2023 1:31:00 PM
Wow, Jay! Your poem is amazing! You used great words and it made me feel happy and inspired. It was like a gentle hug.
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Date: 6/26/2023 12:40:00 PM
- A very charming and sweet good night poem, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 6/26/2023 11:08:00 AM
Indeed a gentle stroke of affection. Much enjoyed the sweet voice of your poem. Great vocabulary throughout, Jay.
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