Get Your Premium Membership

Good Night

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Jim Yerman.


Her first memory of her father…though she doesn’t know the year was when he tucked her into bed one night and whispered ‘I love you’ in her ear. From then it didn’t matter if he read her a Fairy Tale or helped her wipe away a tear he’d always say good night by whispering ‘I love you’ in her ear. And that memory has stayed with her to this day It’s one she never will forget for if there’s a better way to fall asleep at night…she hasn’t found it yet. His fondest memory of his daughter is the day she tapped him on his back and when he turned around she smiled and said, “Daddy, I love you back.” And as she grew a little older…a memory he holds dear is how she’d run up to him spontaneously just to whisper ‘I love you’ in his ear. Even now when she has a family of her own at night the same memory appears just before she closes her eyes she hears him whisper ’I love you’ in her ears And when he closes his eyes he remembers the night she touched him on his back the night he turned the night she smiled the night she whispered, ‘Daddy, I love you back.’ It’s a memory that has stayed with each of them …a memory neither will ever forget for if there’s a better way to fall asleep at night…they haven’t found it yet. And when it was time to say their final goodbye As she held his hand she said, “Daddy I am here.” then she tucked his blanket in to keep him warm and whispered ‘I love you’ in his ear. For she knew as a lifetime of memories brought a smile to her face and tears into her eyes the best way to say goodnight… is also the best way to say goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.


Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry