Good Morning Sunshine

I woke her up early, a quarter past five.
"It’s a beautiful day, let’s go take a drive.”
She didn’t jump up and exclaim I was right.
Instead, “Go away, it’s the middle of the night.”

"C’mon” I said, “Trust me. Let’s go and explore.”
I knew of a place she had not seen before.
I finally convinced her to get up and go,
I promised her one unforgettable show.

I drove her that morning to a place that I knew,
with a panoramic scene from a mountain top view.
Below in the valley as far as could see,
a misty cloud winding like roots of a tree.

The lights from the city like stars all aligned.
A painting so perfect, God’s blessing defined.
Then a bright glowing ball on the horizon arose,
rays of light danced with a brilliant repose.

Breathtaking, beautiful, awesome, serene.
No words could describe what I had just seen.
A moment like that, I could never replace.
It wasn’t the sun, but the look on her face.

Though she won’t admit it, this happened exactly this way, word for word. Branson, Missouri 
2Q004.  It was a gorgeous morning. We have shared many more since then. Sleeping in is 
no longer an option... well, ... for me anyway.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 2:25 PM
Ohhhh my you are "ruttified in grouping of 4 LOL" COUPLETS not 4's ..QUITE a PUNCH on that ending!!! very very good! Light 7 Love
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July 19, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations Kevin on your well deserved win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fast and Fabulous". Love, Carol
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July 18, 2010 at 8:14 PM
What a sweet poem, kevin and congratulations in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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July 18, 2010 at 9:43 AM
Many congratulations on your win in Catie's fine contest Kevin with this gem of a poem >> James
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July 18, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Kevin, this is lovely..congrats on your win. BG
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July 17, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Lovely write, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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