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Good Morning, My Love

Good Morning, My Love Good morning, My Love, I can’t believe what I see, The most gorgeous woman in the World, lying next to me! We’ve been out before, just never all night, But now, here you are, by morning’s first Light! The events of the evening, are still a blur, It was the Time of My Life, of that, I am sure! That I could win the hand, Of the Fairest Maiden in the Land! Thinking back, I get weak in the knees, That you gave in, gave in to my pleas, As I kissed you, you gave me a squeeze, The opportunity, I did then seize! Instantly, I was all over You, You lovingly responded, what else could you do? I seem to remember, being out of Breath, Feeling several times, very near Death! You told me, that You wanted to give Love, To ease your restless Heart, make it calm as a Dove! Holding You now, kissing your Hand, Especially your shiny new gold Wedding Band!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2011 8:08:00 PM
A very different take on the contest. Congratulations, FUN to read. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:31:00 PM
Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in Francine's contest with this lovely piece. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:34:00 AM
Hi Rick - Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Rick in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 10:20:00 PM
sweet CHEERS for your happy win in this contest, rick.. love conquers all! ..huggs, nette
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:36:00 PM
beautiful , last stanza was a surprise, love it congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Rick
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:47:00 PM
A deliroiously happy poem Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:33:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your success in the contest..and finding such a love. BG
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:22:00 PM
So romantic and so in love, Rick. She's a lucky lady. Congratulations on your big win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:55:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this terrific entry .. enjoy your top spot so well deserved with luv..
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:38:00 AM
Just lovely! Am a pushover for romantic poems! take care~Deb
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:09:00 AM
Beautiful love poem, it is a near death experience, so well versed and what a super last line. I do hope you have found the love of your life and that you have many years of happiness ahead. I am married 30 years and still so happy and as young as your thoughts in this poem. Love has no age:))
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