Good Morning, My Love

Good Morning, My Love Good morning, My Love, I can’t believe what I see, The most gorgeous woman in the World, lying next to me! We’ve been out before, just never all night, But now, here you are, by morning’s first Light! The events of the evening, are still a blur, It was the Time of My Life, of that, I am sure! That I could win the hand, Of the Fairest Maiden in the Land! Thinking back, I get weak in the knees, That you gave in, gave in to my pleas, As I kissed you, you gave me a squeeze, The opportunity, I did then seize! Instantly, I was all over You, You lovingly responded, what else could you do? I seem to remember, being out of Breath, Feeling several times, very near Death! You told me, that You wanted to give Love, To ease your restless Heart, make it calm as a Dove! Holding You now, kissing your Hand, Especially your shiny new gold Wedding Band!
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Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 8:08 PM
A very different take on the contest. Congratulations, FUN to read. Luv, Andrea
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Good one..Congratulations on your win..Sara
Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Congratulations Rick on your win in Francine's contest with this lovely piece. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Calhoun Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Hi Rick - Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Rick in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 10:20 PM
sweet CHEERS for your happy win in this contest, rick.. love conquers all! ..huggs, nette
Roberts Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:36 PM
beautiful , last stanza was a surprise, love it congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Rick
Johnson Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:47 PM
A deliroiously happy poem Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Congrats Rick on your success in the contest..and finding such a love. BG
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January 20, 2011 at 3:22 PM
So romantic and so in love, Rick. She's a lucky lady. Congratulations on your big win in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Congrats Rick on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this terrific entry .. enjoy your top spot so well deserved with luv..
Wilson Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Just lovely! Am a pushover for romantic poems! take care~Deb
Laan Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 3:09 AM
Beautiful love poem, it is a near death experience, so well versed and what a super last line. I do hope you have found the love of your life and that you have many years of happiness ahead. I am married 30 years and still so happy and as young as your thoughts in this poem. Love has no age:))
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