Good Morning

scoops of mid - dawn sun greet my fresh skin touching laces of buttered stems, infant leaves, soft-boiled branches threaded doily thin on herbs of morn's scented face with tender weaves how intangible this soft fire in my belly’s bonnet splattering like auburn harvest blown unto air praised in all shades---the topaz, sapphire, garnet of paradise graced by bouquets ever fair good morning cuddles every dreamer and lover some god feeds humming harps and blushed stones receding beneath feet's waking slumber as charms of solemn calm soak daylight tones. .......... (c) Your Pick Any Theme/ Max 14 Lines Brian Strand's Contest By: nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Sorry for late comment! this is breath-takingly beautiful!!!!! Congratulations on your first place win--Lori
Foster Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations on your success with this excellent work Nette. It leaves a nice warm glow...Margaret
Sherman Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 5:58 PM
Wow! Fantastic write...I'm loving it. Congrats.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Congrats Nette luv on first place win with this elegant poem for Brian's contest my friend.. truly lovely... missing u ...
Quigley Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations on taking first place in Brian's contest nette.
Brown Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Pick" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 2:06 AM
Good morning, Miss Nette! I thot this charming poem stirred my heart before. I was taken by the images of tiny buttered leaves woven in a magnificent and fragile manner...u are leading the parade now that the soup is back on.....Simmer simmer. Yummmmy!
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 8:07 PM
Wonderful, Splendid. Congratulations, Nette. One awesome write! Luv, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Oh,I have lots of favorite phrases! "herbal rareness of their sunlit psalms''/"splattering like auburn harvest of wheat blown unto air" Congrad's on your WIN! Light & Love "
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Good Morning" Contest, Nette! Delightful write to read... beautiful imagery! Love, Annalise
Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations Nette on your win in Francine's contest with this wonderful poetry. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Calhoun Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Hi Nette - Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:36 PM
this was lovely nette, congrats on yor second place win in my contest
Mannan Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 7:55 PM
Nette this is a beautiful account of morning.many congratulations for this super win.
Richards Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Beautiful and unique as you always make your wonderful poetry!! Congratulations Nette !! Terrific writing !
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Johnson Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:45 PM
Congratulations on your big number 2nd win. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Copngrats Nette on your big win in the contest. BG
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:21 PM
Nette, so pleased to see your poem in the winners' circle. Congratulations!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Congrats Nette my friend on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this excellent entry ... enjoy another top spot for a well deserved win with luv..
Docherty Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Beautiful imagery nette, makes for an interesting read, thanks for your kind comment today! All the best for the contest...
Neels Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 5:43 AM
One word breathtaking comes to mind Nette.. All the best for Francine's contest with these awesome images, love Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 4:52 AM
Oh so lovely and imaginative and filled with vibrant visuals Nette my friend.. a sure chart topper my friend as this one just makes me long for warm weather even more now... hurry luv... "Sweetheart" is freezing here..haha..good luck... amazing...
Devonshire Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 12:37 AM
It must be great to wake up and see the world through your eyes, Nette. So many amazing images will make Francine delighted with this entry. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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