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scoops of mid - dawn sun greet my fresh skin touching laces of buttered stems, infant leaves, soft-boiled branches threaded doily thin on herbs of morn's scented face with tender weaves how intangible this soft fire in my belly’s bonnet splattering like auburn harvest blown unto air praised in all shades---the topaz, sapphire, garnet of paradise graced by bouquets ever fair good morning cuddles every dreamer and lover some god feeds humming harps and blushed stones receding beneath feet's waking slumber as charms of solemn calm soak daylight tones. .......... (c) Your Pick Any Theme/ Max 14 Lines Brian Strand's Contest By: nette onclaud

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Date: 10/23/2011 11:00:00 AM
Sorry for late comment! this is breath-takingly beautiful!!!!! Congratulations on your first place win--Lori
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your success with this excellent work Nette. It leaves a nice warm glow...Margaret
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:58:00 PM
Wow! Fantastic write...I'm loving it. Congrats.
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Date: 10/21/2011 3:31:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on first place win with this elegant poem for Brian's contest my friend.. truly lovely... missing u ...
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Date: 10/21/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on taking first place in Brian's contest nette.
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Your Pick" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2011 2:06:00 AM
Good morning, Miss Nette! I thot this charming poem stirred my heart before. I was taken by the images of tiny buttered leaves woven in a magnificent and fragile manner...u are leading the parade now that the soup is back on.....Simmer simmer. Yummmmy!
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Date: 1/27/2011 8:07:00 PM
Wonderful, Splendid. Congratulations, Nette. One awesome write! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:38:00 PM
Oh,I have lots of favorite phrases! "herbal rareness of their sunlit psalms''/"splattering like auburn harvest of wheat blown unto air" Congrad's on your WIN! Light & Love "
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Good Morning" Contest, Nette! Delightful write to read... beautiful imagery! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on your win in Francine's contest with this wonderful poetry. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:33:00 AM
Hi Nette - Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nette in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:36:00 PM
this was lovely nette, congrats on yor second place win in my contest
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:55:00 PM
Nette this is a beautiful account of morning.many congratulations for this super win.
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:50:00 PM
Beautiful and unique as you always make your wonderful poetry!! Congratulations Nette !! Terrific writing !
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your big number 2nd win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:34:00 PM
Copngrats Nette on your big win in the contest. BG
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:21:00 PM
Nette, so pleased to see your poem in the winners' circle. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:54:00 PM
Congrats Nette my friend on your big win in the Good Morning contest with this excellent entry ... enjoy another top spot for a well deserved win with luv..
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:23:00 AM
Beautiful imagery nette, makes for an interesting read, thanks for your kind comment today! All the best for the contest...
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Date: 1/13/2011 5:43:00 AM
One word breathtaking comes to mind Nette.. All the best for Francine's contest with these awesome images, love Wilma
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:52:00 AM
Oh so lovely and imaginative and filled with vibrant visuals Nette my friend.. a sure chart topper my friend as this one just makes me long for warm weather even more now... hurry luv... "Sweetheart" is freezing here..haha..good luck... amazing...
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:37:00 AM
It must be great to wake up and see the world through your eyes, Nette. So many amazing images will make Francine delighted with this entry. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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