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Good Man

When I see the jasmine-shadow on his face Leaves of soft sun smiling in his interaction White cloud moisturizes his accent and says Happy you are for truly you are a good man He is friendly with all whether rose or thorn But he avoids the latter when they hurt him Talking with him you will never miss the morn But sets about a task with concentration grim When he happily steps forward to light a flame Inside the dark dejection diseases and disquiet Removes a few barbs from their window frame The birds come and tweet he is someone right The other day when a tree got injured in a gale I found him raising fund to transplant the same With him the wind merrily plays in big white sail Ask anyone they will say good man is his name ______________________________________ 31/10/2016

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Date: 10/31/2016 10:34:00 PM
It would be a treasure to have a friend like this! :) beautiful poem!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/31/2016 10:46:00 PM
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Date: 10/31/2016 7:16:00 PM
A few men like him would do so much good as to save the whole world my good friend, Probir! Your rhyme is just fine my friend!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/31/2016 10:46:00 PM
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Date: 10/31/2016 9:21:00 AM
Very wonderful tribute to your friend. Such people are a joy to be around. Thank you for sharing.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/31/2016 10:52:00 AM
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Date: 10/31/2016 9:11:00 AM
Really nice poetic description, Probir. I love the lone "Friendly with all whether rose or thorn" Wonderful!!!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/31/2016 10:53:00 AM
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Date: 10/31/2016 6:46:00 AM
A great rhyme Probir! A delight to read this late hour. A pure delight.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/31/2016 10:53:00 AM
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