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Good Luck She Said

Good luck she said. Ha! I make my own luck. Always have, always will. Good luck in the contest. Good luck on stage. Good luck, good luck, good luck. Showing me her sweet self. I am not fooled. Her pure nasty resonates. Her nasty eyes, her nasty smile. Her pure and evil nasty self. Good luck she says, but break a leg, she means. Break a finger, break a neck, die, woman, die. Good luck my ass. She has never meant it. She never will. I know for she is my nemesis. I smile and wave, pretending to be fooled by my self-reflection.

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Date: 1/23/2019 5:08:00 PM
That's the way it goes...good portrayal.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/23/2019 5:26:00 PM
Thank you. I got such a kick out of that last line it was ridiculous!
Date: 1/22/2019 4:27:00 AM
Sometimes we do make our own luck, but a lot of the times it is chance.. Well expressed
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/22/2019 5:13:00 AM
Thank you Silent One; I readily rely on and depend on chances as they come my way so often.
Date: 1/21/2019 9:59:00 PM
feel good of dude all through this poem
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/22/2019 5:13:00 AM
Thank you Mahtab.
Date: 1/21/2019 5:15:00 PM
oh WOW, Caren. what a TWIST at the end!! YOu could think that?? Anyway, a FAVE.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/21/2019 7:00:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Yes, I can think this all day long. Having all of my "ha ha ha" issues has helped me get a grip on a variety of my selves - false and true ones.
Date: 1/21/2019 1:18:00 PM
Love the ending! Yes, ourselves, that evil woman, gets in the way. <3 Kim
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/21/2019 7:01:00 PM
She does, and Kim, we have to keep reminding ourselves, to tell her to go, in a kind, but firm way, not kicking her or whipping her, but putting up with her nonsense no more

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