Good Life

Enter good
Good life together
Intertwines
Romance starts
Flower for your tender heart
It is a good life

Russell Sivey

Form: Shadorma 3/5/3/3/7/5
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 4:48 PM
The romance part I like best! Tis indeed a flower for the tender heart and I hope yours has one too. Luv, Lizzie
Johnson Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 2:18 AM
happy new year mate... may life treat you very well, expect to find contentment state, like the ringing of a bell, sometime...
Horne Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Love this form - must try it. Hope you always enjoy the good life, Russell. Happy New Year, my friend
Pettit Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 11:24 PM
Good example of a shadorma poem. I hope you are having a good life, Russell. Happy New Year. I'm in the Eastern Time Zone, and it is already the new year here.
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