Good Deeds

A lot of happiness you bring
When good deeds you swing
Many hearts pure songs sing
In perfect seems everything
A world in which aid is the zing
The doer’s soul takes wing
By the joy that to others he bring
For to help is the only thing
And makes a person an everlasting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 4:42 PM
this one here is a sweet poem, by the way!
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Your poem A Garland of Flowers was so nice I had faved it a long time ago. You should use it in my FAVE contest!! Which will be closing soon I think.
Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 5:11 AM
Beautiful words Tahera, good luck in the contest >> James :)
La France Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 2:42 PM
You did very well with this mono rhyme, I have still to write mine, so wish me" luck but this is just great, so I am wishing "you "luck in the contest~~
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Good one enjoyed the rhymes..The theme of the work was a great one..Your presence at my work was very encouraging..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Enjioyed this awe inspiring thoughts on good deeds, Tahera
Neels Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 12:34 AM
Beautiful write on good deeds Tahera, if for the contest, good luck to you.. Hope 2011 will be a great one for you and your family, love Wilma
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