Good Cheer

Coming over the mountain top is a
truck with painted brew ski on each side 
                     with a fella wearing a baseball 
                                 cap bringing good cheer and good 
                                          times to all who wish to particapate.

                  Meanwhile this fella has always got
                               an eagle eye out for old cars or trucks
                                        he can restore. Almost like a woman
see their related they both have fine
                                         curves just like a guitar.

                    After awhile the good cheer man anticipates
        what waits in the next town or if 
                                    he'll be a star for one of the bars so let 
us toast our beers and have some good old 
                            cheers for the man that brings our beers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/9/2009 11:51:00 PM
Cheryl - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:59:00 PM
Good cheer, to you! Congratulations on being featured this week. Always, Daneann
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Date: 4/9/2009 12:34:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/7/2009 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations ... your beautiful poem featured today is a joy to read.
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Date: 4/7/2009 5:16:00 AM
Cheryl Good cheer for beer always gets my vote well done on your featured poem this week. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:27:00 PM
....and I am truly and sincerely looking forward to reading many many more of "Your Fabulous Writes" dear lady!!!:):)~And until we meet again, soon I hope~keep that happy thought which "You" hold within this cheerful write here!!!:):) And, as always, "My Love & Warmth To 'You & Yours' Always, John!!!"~Sweet Dreams Dear:):)
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Date: 4/6/2009 9:21:00 PM
Smile~Sometimes, I'll have a beer or two too! Just to slice the edge off of rough edges every now and then!? I love "Your" personality her dear "Gifted & Lovely Cheryl!!!":):)~Smile~You sound as though "You" would be a wonderful lady to share a moment in life with!!!:):)~And I am glad that "You" decided to remain here at the soup!!!:):)....cont....
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha"
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:33:00 PM
I like the lighthearted feel of this one. You've got me smiling. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:12:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved featured write! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2009 2:53:00 AM
Strange how its cool for a man to have curves in 'wrong' places yet not so for a woman! lol.If I could change something slightly - 2nd line/1st stanza.Maybe is only punctuation needed or is regionaldialect,don't know but perhaps if is dialect it's a lesson for us all to remind when writing to appeal to further nationalities.Although its open to the writer for is generally left to how much you want the reader to decipher.Otherwise brings a smile!Well done!!Kindest thoughts/intentions.Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:10:00 AM
I sense a feint amount of commercial cynicism, cool! am I right, Cheryl?
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