Good and Evil

...adapted from the novel 'Mr Pye' by Mervyn Peake


Balding and sprightly, he's filled with bold dreams
to make us all happy and free;
he selects as his target a small Channel Island,
a representative sampling of people just like you and me.

All he wants is that folks get along,
without all those disputes and fights,
he tries to bring peace to this sheltered enclave,
just by doing good deeds he can sleep nights.

He practises witchcraft to bring them together,
'if it works...' are his words for the day;
a sense of humour is paramount these days
to keep those nay-sayers at bay.

In the midst of these noble endeavours
there's discomfort that turns out
to be wings that are sprouting quite clearly,
a cause for concern there's no doubt.

It seems that his kindness has made him an angel,  
the more he does good the bigger they grow
till they're actually poking right out of his shirt,
my heavens, they're starting to show!

So he counters with bad deeds in hopes that they'll shrink,
indiscretions and plain bald-faced lies.
Sure enough they diminish, in fact they're all gone,
he need not create a disguise.

But this scheme that he's started gets odder,
there's a growth on his temples, two horns;
he's been busy negating the good that he's done
he's turned Devil, good gracious! he's torn

between Good and Evil, just what should he do?
he's conflicted and cloaked in disgrace;
he sits down to ponder which way he should turn,
'til it's clear, like the nose on his face.

On the horns of a moral dilemma
he simply gives in to pure Good;
he embraces his people, he loves them so much,
then his wings are full-sprouted; he could

just take to the air and keep flying
as far as infinity goes,
so he bids the assembly a tearful farewell,
his next stop the cosmos, who knows?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/9/2012 7:50:00 AM
Ah, the dilemma; I guess both good and evil have their share of thorns. I love the tale of this guy with his wings and horns Keith, it has a great ending. Can't imagine I'm the first to comment, everyone should have the privilege of reading your amazing poems.
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