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" MARS AND VENUS " MY PHOTO, ©

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You and I, my friend, are not different at all, although At first glance, we seem to come from very different worlds. True, you wear the regalia of justice, virtue, and love And I the rugs of injustice, vice, and hate But Don't let yourself be deceived by appearances though for We are the descendants of the same father: Eros or Cupid. As you may know, Eros was the child of goddess Aphrodite or Venus, the goddess of love, And that of Ares or Mars - the God of war who apparently are our Grandparents. It is clear, therefore, that you are not just my friend but my brother, For Whatever characteristics we both have inherited are the results of Their sacred union Thus The virtues inherited by you, I have inherited them as well, and the vices that You see in me are also to be found in your soul. From that we easily we could conclude that you are not born intrinsically Good, nor was I born intrinsically evil. Only the decisions we take and the choices we make in the circumstances life Puts us in, make the difference. We must remember that there is nothing purely good or purely evil for the Two forces coexist and the two are interconnected. Needless to say then that I could very well be you and you very well be me if You and I had differently acted. You see, my brother, Necessity has established within our souls, divine strife - this endless battle Of Venus against Mars which each of them aims for supremacy to gain in the Core of our being. Now Pending who the winner of this titanic struggle is, determines who Good is going to be declared And Who is going to be declared evil! © Demetrios Trifiatis 29 February 2020

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Date: 2/29/2020 11:06:00 PM
we are all born equal but our paths chosen can shape us, so though alike, we can become very different with different paths taken....thought provoking poem...i enjoy your deep writes my friend! hugs and blessings
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Date: 3/2/2020 4:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx
Date: 2/29/2020 11:34:00 AM
- We need each other, my friend :) Everyone is perfect in their own way - And we have to accept that people are different - no matter how difficult life can be - The skin is our packaging, visible to everyone :) - everyone is responsible for adapting their language to the audience (personality and temperament ... good or evil)- A thought-provoking poem that will give most people something   "to chew on" - Excellent :) - Have a wonderful Saturday evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:30:00 PM
My dearest Anne-Lise, this poem is a philosophical one has nothing to do with race, color, talent or creed. Thank you for taking the time to visit and comment. I always appreciate your comments and for that I am thankful. Hugs xxx
Date: 2/29/2020 10:24:00 AM
A native fellow once said that we all have two natures and the nature that becomes strongest is the one we choose to feed. I think you described human nature quite artfully my friend.
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:27:00 PM
So happy to receive your visit and dearest friend, Richard. Blessings. comment
Date: 2/29/2020 6:59:00 AM
Your opening line spells the essence of your poem: You and I my friend, are not different at all... Awesome sentiments in this intelligent discourse my friend. Vivid, colorful flowers!
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Date: 2/29/2020 3:25:00 PM
Yes, you are right. I wanted to show from the beginning where I was going! Thank you so much for your kind comment dear, Vijay!
Date: 2/29/2020 5:13:00 AM
Insightful discussions about good and evil. you are so right, its all about free will, and the choices we make in life. As you so aptly put it....' It is only the decisions we take and the choices we make in the circumstances life puts us in that makes the difference. This should get POTD, its brilliant, a fave for me my dearest friend....Maria xox
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Date: 2/29/2020 5:27:00 AM
Dearest Maris, I am delighted you found the time to visit and comment. I appreciate your generous comment and for the vote of confidence. God bless you my dear. Hugs xxx
Date: 2/29/2020 5:01:00 AM
Very thought provoking Demetrios, colour, location, religion is not what makes us who we are, inside we are all the same, it's the choices we make in which path we choose in life. Tom
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Date: 2/29/2020 5:25:00 AM
So glad to see you after so long dear, Tom. Thank you for agreeing with my statement. Blessings!

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