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Good-By Blues

The tears fell on my pillow, as I clinched the flower tight. The meaning of the color would keep me awake tonight. I found the single flower as I walked through the door. It had fallen off the table and, was laying on the floor. I bent down to retrieve it and the sweet scent filled my nose. I held it tenderly, admiring the, beautiful color of the rose. A letter from my love was sitting on a table close by. I picked it up joyously, to read words, that would make me cry. It seems, that he didn't love me words that he said weren't true. The rose was only a reminder, that's why the color was blue. No red, to say he loved me Not pink that's for a sweetheart, Nor yellow for the jealous lover Blue, forever we would be apart. Thorns pierce my fingers as the petals wilt within my hand. Good-by my precious blue rose, I'm moving on, you understand. For The Blue Rose Contest

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Date: 6/29/2010 9:47:00 PM
Lovely. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations Karla on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 12:04:00 AM
Excellent evocative writing full of emotion Karla.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:45:00 PM
Congrats Karla on your big win in the Blue Rose contest .. a glorious write and win for u to enjoy .. amazing.. with luv Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:32:00 PM
Congratualtions on your win in the contest. Love,Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:38:00 PM
Kara, congratulations on placing 4th in my contest. A superbly written poem.
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Date: 6/18/2010 9:09:00 AM
Great Write Karla....Good Luck in contest.....Larry
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Date: 6/17/2010 8:15:00 PM
Very touching and emotional poem Karla..good luck in Mac's contest.. this one is sure to please... very creative.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 6/17/2010 7:53:00 PM
lovely write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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