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Gone With the Pie

They plotted long, that winter’s night Beneath the Christmas star so bright Three tiny mice in elf like suits Could smell the pie of many fruits And as it baked, their hunger grew So they decided what to do They knew that cook would, as a rule Set pies on window sill to cool They would appear as Christmas elves Instead of their most scary selves And then the cook, they would acquaint, Remove their clothes and she would faint Just then, with super mouse like strength They’d slide that pie the needed length Into their cubby hole nearby Like that!, they’d be gone with the pie 12/12/18

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Date: 12/18/2018 2:21:00 PM
So innovative, creative, and stimulative! Moreover, I am very appreciative of the opportunity to read such wonderful holiday fare. A beauty, Mike. It's a FAVE for me, for sure. Happy Holidays! ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/18/2018 3:00:00 PM
Wow, I'm so glad you liked it Gershon, Thanks!
Date: 12/17/2018 4:46:00 PM
So creative, Mike! CONGRATS! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/17/2018 6:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Janice xxoo
Date: 12/17/2018 12:24:00 PM
Lol... those dirty, sneaky rats :) Mike, congratulations on your win!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/17/2018 6:38:00 PM
Thanks Mark !!
Date: 12/16/2018 9:41:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/17/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Line xxoo
Date: 12/16/2018 4:24:00 PM
Sneaky little mice, stealing your pie! So cute and clever, congratulations on your win!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/16/2018 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Michelle, I am so happy that you liked it xxoo
Date: 12/13/2018 12:56:00 PM
I really enjoyed your cute storyline and excellent rhythm and rhyme,Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/13/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Wendy, I really so appreciate your kind comments xxoo
Date: 12/13/2018 12:35:00 PM
- A tastefully delicious poem, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/13/2018 1:00:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 12/12/2018 5:51:00 PM
Hello Mike, oh this poem is cute, and i got a chuckle out of it. have a nice Wednesday evening. xxxxxx.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/12/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thanks so much Darlene xxoo
Date: 12/12/2018 4:19:00 PM
Totally delightful, Mike. Love your poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/12/2018 4:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Line xxoo
Date: 12/12/2018 3:39:00 PM
those sneaky little pugs, hmmm, they stole the pie , Hope its fiction, otherwise Xmas will be pretty lean. Enjoyed your poem . Thank you for sharing a light hearted verse today
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/12/2018 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Pixie Dust for your visit and kind comments !!!
Date: 12/12/2018 3:00:00 PM
A detective plot to your story..enjoyed reading the rhythmic words..well written Mike..best for a win.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/12/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay !!!
Date: 12/12/2018 2:59:00 PM
Cute one Mike! A fun poem to read today. Happy Wednesday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/12/2018 3:14:00 PM
Happy Wednesday Heidi, Thank you xxoo
Date: 12/12/2018 2:35:00 PM
This was great Mike and I can definitely see this one in the winner's circle on this contest. I really liked this a lot, the story was cute and the meter and rhyming were superb. Nicely done my friend.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/12/2018 2:38:00 PM
That's so kind of you to say Chris, Thanks so much !!

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