Terry Miller Poet Rhyme

Gone Fishing

Burbling brooks
Small fish hooks
A rod goes thwip
With subtle whip
the float will drop
soft gentle plop
Tick, tock, tick
Patience the trick
A mighty thwap
The line goes snap
Wind with zeal
The whirring reel
Splish, splash, splosh
Oh my gosh
That's one big fish
Fit for a dish



Onomatopoeia Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet  
Date wrote: 8th July 2022

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Joseph Spence Sr July 12, 2022 at 4:01 AM Awesome job. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the lines. I bet it's a great and delicious dish. Blessings always! Terry Miller July 16, 2022 at 1:12 AM Thank you, sir, I appreciate your kind comments

Gershon Wolf July 10, 2022 at 7:08 PM Love it! Good luck in the contest. ~ Fried Fisherman Terry Miller July 11, 2022 at 12:54 AM Thank you, Gershon

L Milton Hankins July 8, 2022 at 8:49 AM Nice work, Terry. Your use of the required onomatapoetic words makes it come alive. Terry Miller July 11, 2022 at 12:55 AM I tested myself with this one to see how short a verse I could write and still fit in the required 10 words

Sotto Poet July 8, 2022 at 6:39 AM Terry, your contribution was fantastic and very well-liked. The lines are witty, and the overall tone is one that is easy on the ears. Best of luck to you in the contest! Terry Miller July 11, 2022 at 12:55 AM Thank you. It is always satisfying to receive your compliments