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Gondola of Dreams

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My hand touched warm water, yet all in life seemed so absurd. I'd gone to sleep, forgotten the power the absolute privilege.. to the spoken word. "Where do our friends go" I asked Giorgia Boscolo "when wake of your gondola reaches the sea?" My gondoliera answered naught but a wink mirroring ripples in a watery dream. A sudden fatigue washed the day, rested my sight away. To mountains gilded in golden sun where farewells are never long. "Can you stay" said a sweet voice to whom I was familiar as a child "of course" I replied. Looked upon a face, kind features of a friend I'd known yet never the toll to be paid.. I miss you still my ice and storm. 'Was a little bird silenced and shot. In my dreams, the bird still flies even if the world cares naught.. even in nightmare' skies my bird lives.

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Date: 9/30/2023 2:22:00 PM
the perfect title...I can envison a gandola floating on the surreal waters of your dreams. I enjoyed riding in the gandola of your fascinating read. I truly enjoyed your unique style. Well done, Sara
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Date: 9/30/2023 4:22:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you, glad you enjoyed the ride. Had that word stuck in my head all day. Left to wonder why, or by whom(?). Perhaps worth noting; the story of Dante's daughter Giorgia. The world doesn't seem so big when we chance at sharing a piece of it. Like your 'Timeless' poem about Myrtle. -Richard
Date: 9/30/2023 1:18:00 PM
Hi Richard…lovely write …..dreams are so interesting and so hard to self analyse! Debx
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Date: 9/30/2023 4:07:00 PM
Hi Deb, Thank you for that comment. So much to learn from our dreams, hang on to yours. Happy Saturday in writing. -Richard

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