Goldfish

Glass aquarium holds golden fish, moving so gently, looking very grand with their flowing fins, guaranteed to make one glow, grateful for watching God's beauty reflected. --------------------

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John Michaels

Date: 3/12/2017 5:39:00 AM

A lovely little poem; I like how it all flows into one seamless narrative, but still manages to stick to the form. A well-deserved win!

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 2/19/2017 7:55:00 AM

Lovely! Congrats!!

Darren White

Date: 2/10/2017 1:17:00 AM

Jo, this is a beautiful poem, well deserved placement :)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/9/2017 11:07:00 PM

Congrats Jo to win on your nice piece.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/9/2017 9:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jo. Beautiful pleiades.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 2/9/2017 8:38:00 PM

This flows so lovely. You want to read it over and over. Graceful. Congratulations.

Laura Leiser

Date: 2/9/2017 8:16:00 PM

I liked this one alot, Jo! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2017 7:42:00 PM

Congrats, Jo!

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/9/2017 5:55:00 PM

Jo, your descriptive words flowed so smoothly and wonderfully portrayed your title. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Joanna Daniel
Date: 2/10/2017 1:06:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim:) all glory be to God alone:)

Deborah Burch

Date: 12/19/2016 10:23:00 AM

Nicely done Jo!! Good luck in the contest! Big Hugggs. Deb

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/7/2016 4:51:00 PM

Such a lovely picture and tribute you created with these words, Jo. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Len Gasun

Date: 12/4/2016 11:33:00 PM

Enchanting verse about enchanting creatures my dear friend, Jo. A 7 and a fave. Good luck always! Hugs!

Vincent Flannery

Date: 12/4/2016 8:28:00 AM

Beautifully said and the style added to the sense that even in simplicity there is so much more. God Bless.

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2016 9:20:00 PM

Hi Jo, Just to let you know, chapter two of, Out of the Darkness, has been posted. bfn. Elaine

Elaine George

Date: 12/2/2016 4:21:00 PM

Such a Lovely verse, Jo. Also, thank you for stopping by and reading the first chapter of, Out of the Darkness. I hope to post chapter 2 soon. Busy with Christmas. I will let you know when I do. Elaine

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/1/2016 9:41:00 PM

Absolutely great, Jo! Janice