Joanna Daniel Poet Pleiades

Goldfish

Glass aquarium holds
                    golden fish, moving so 
                 gently, looking very 
              grand with their flowing fins,
           guaranteed to make one 
       glow, grateful for watching 
   God's beauty reflected.

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John Michaels March 12, 2017 at 5:39 AM A lovely little poem; I like how it all flows into one seamless narrative, but still manages to stick to the form. A well-deserved win!

Sushma A. Singh February 19, 2017 at 7:55 AM Lovely! Congrats!!

Darren White February 10, 2017 at 1:17 AM Jo, this is a beautiful poem, well deserved placement :)

Anisha Dutta February 9, 2017 at 11:07 PM Congrats Jo to win on your nice piece.

Agnes Krampe February 9, 2017 at 9:44 PM Congrats on your win, Jo. Beautiful pleiades.

Janis Medders Tobechi February 9, 2017 at 8:38 PM This flows so lovely. You want to read it over and over. Graceful. Congratulations.

Laura Leiser February 9, 2017 at 8:16 PM I liked this one alot, Jo! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Rodrigues February 9, 2017 at 7:42 PM Congrats, Jo!

Kim Merryman February 9, 2017 at 5:55 PM Jo, your descriptive words flowed so smoothly and wonderfully portrayed your title. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim Joanna Daniel February 10, 2017 at 1:06 AM Thank you very much, Kim:) all glory be to God alone:)

Deborah Burch December 19, 2016 at 10:23 AM Nicely done Jo!! Good luck in the contest! Big Hugggs. Deb

Sandra Haight December 7, 2016 at 4:51 PM Such a lovely picture and tribute you created with these words, Jo. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Len Gasun December 4, 2016 at 11:33 PM Enchanting verse about enchanting creatures my dear friend, Jo. A 7 and a fave. Good luck always! Hugs!

Vincent Flannery December 4, 2016 at 8:28 AM Beautifully said and the style added to the sense that even in simplicity there is so much more. God Bless.

Elaine George December 3, 2016 at 9:20 PM Hi Jo, Just to let you know, chapter two of, Out of the Darkness, has been posted. bfn. Elaine

Elaine George December 2, 2016 at 4:21 PM Such a Lovely verse, Jo. Also, thank you for stopping by and reading the first chapter of, Out of the Darkness. I hope to post chapter 2 soon. Busy with Christmas. I will let you know when I do. Elaine

Janice Canerdy December 1, 2016 at 9:41 PM Absolutely great, Jo! Janice

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2016 at 7:38 PM Ahhh, this is so Gorgeous. Yours and Jan's my favorites so far.

Probir Gupta December 1, 2016 at 4:37 AM small but beautiful ... should get a good placement ...

Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2016 at 3:23 AM - Shiny and lovely written, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison December 1, 2016 at 1:41 AM such a beautiful flow to your poem Jo good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan x

Laura Leiser December 1, 2016 at 12:13 AM Excellent Pleiades about goldfish, Jo! Good luck in the contest :)

Chris Green November 30, 2016 at 9:22 PM Amazing Jo. This was truly a wonderful piece of writing. I wish you much luck in the contest