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Goldfish

Glass aquarium holds
                    golden fish, moving so 
                 gently, looking very 
              grand with their flowing fins,
           guaranteed to make one 
       glow, grateful for watching 
   God's beauty reflected.

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John Michaels Date: 3/12/2017 5:39:00 AM A lovely little poem; I like how it all flows into one seamless narrative, but still manages to stick to the form. A well-deserved win! Login to Reply

Sushma A. Singh Date: 2/19/2017 7:55:00 AM Lovely! Congrats!! Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 2/10/2017 1:17:00 AM Jo, this is a beautiful poem, well deserved placement :) Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 2/9/2017 11:07:00 PM Congrats Jo to win on your nice piece. Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 2/9/2017 9:44:00 PM Congrats on your win, Jo. Beautiful pleiades. Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 2/9/2017 8:38:00 PM This flows so lovely. You want to read it over and over. Graceful. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 2/9/2017 8:16:00 PM I liked this one alot, Jo! Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/9/2017 7:42:00 PM Congrats, Jo! Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 2/9/2017 5:55:00 PM Jo, your descriptive words flowed so smoothly and wonderfully portrayed your title. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim Login to Reply Joanna Daniel Date: 2/10/2017 1:06:00 AM Thank you very much, Kim:) all glory be to God alone:)

Deborah Burch Date: 12/19/2016 10:23:00 AM Nicely done Jo!! Good luck in the contest! Big Hugggs. Deb Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 12/7/2016 4:51:00 PM Such a lovely picture and tribute you created with these words, Jo. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 12/4/2016 11:33:00 PM Enchanting verse about enchanting creatures my dear friend, Jo. A 7 and a fave. Good luck always! Hugs! Login to Reply

Vincent Flannery Date: 12/4/2016 8:28:00 AM Beautifully said and the style added to the sense that even in simplicity there is so much more. God Bless. Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 12/3/2016 9:20:00 PM Hi Jo, Just to let you know, chapter two of, Out of the Darkness, has been posted. bfn. Elaine Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 12/2/2016 4:21:00 PM Such a Lovely verse, Jo. Also, thank you for stopping by and reading the first chapter of, Out of the Darkness. I hope to post chapter 2 soon. Busy with Christmas. I will let you know when I do. Elaine Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/1/2016 9:41:00 PM Absolutely great, Jo! Janice Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2016 7:38:00 PM Ahhh, this is so Gorgeous. Yours and Jan's my favorites so far. Login to Reply

Probir Gupta Date: 12/1/2016 4:37:00 AM small but beautiful ... should get a good placement ... Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/1/2016 3:23:00 AM - Shiny and lovely written, Jo :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/1/2016 1:41:00 AM such a beautiful flow to your poem Jo good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan x Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 12/1/2016 12:13:00 AM Excellent Pleiades about goldfish, Jo! Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 11/30/2016 9:22:00 PM Amazing Jo. This was truly a wonderful piece of writing. I wish you much luck in the contest Login to Reply