Golden Valentine

Like eternity's reminisces brushing the day of hearts with golden notes, puckered cheeks dance kiss to fox trot the night as twenty fingers lock in a serenade of violins-- elegant, old woman is she while his man, a grayish escort oh divine divine in a night wafting musky air: twin souls heavenly blessed fondling aged spines so gently, to imbue love with moonlit reminisces that in the nearness of lifetime's end, both climb inside starglow on flight… drip-dropping of diamond confetti !
* dedicated to loving couples celebrating their 50th Valentine. Contest :Love Is In The Air Tonight Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 2/4/2017 10:13:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 7/22/2011 8:29:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/21/2011 1:20:00 PM
Lovely Nette. congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2011 9:07:00 AM
Nette, Great entry for a top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:13:00 AM
What a wonderful postscript and dedication this lovely poem holds! Congrats to Nette !
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:43:00 AM
Nette, super congratulations on your win in Brian's contest :) *hugs*
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:13:00 AM
Congrats Nette luv on another first place win.. so happy to be sharing with u ... and please send me some golden confetti.. to celebrate ..haha.. enjoy ..
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:31:00 AM
Terrific piece Nette. It's sure to do well in Adeleke's contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:05:00 PM
Amazing astounding awesome articulate artistic ..Nette my friend.. great inspiration to those who are headed for their fiftieth celebration .. doubt if Ron and I will make that ..haha.. good luck in the contest.. as Adeleke will just luv..my friend...
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:38:00 AM
A poet calld Nette Master of valued word and vignette “Wrote” many a beautiful verse Taken from another’s purse. I am that loser of money And I want ‘em back, honey.
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:25:00 AM
I will not enter this contest, thus allowing you to win by default - with great affection and humour :)).........Syd
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Date: 2/17/2011 8:23:00 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...........nice
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:12:00 AM
I picture them having a party on a beach with this one. You used alliteration in every single word. I bet Adeleke will love it! Good luck in the contest, sweetie!
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:03:00 AM
Reads like winning material to me..My parents celebrated their 76th...Almost to 77 but didn't quite make it..Good luck in the contest with this great Alliteration...Sara
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:11:00 AM
Such lovely images Nette. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 2/16/2011 11:06:00 PM
beautiful,i love diamond dreams,lovely entry.
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