Golden Valentine

Like eternity's reminisces brushing the day of hearts with golden notes, puckered cheeks dance kiss to fox trot the night as twenty fingers lock in a serenade of violins-- elegant, old woman is she while his man, a grayish escort oh divine divine in a night wafting musky air: twin souls heavenly blessed fondling aged spines so gently, to imbue love with moonlit reminisces that in the nearness of lifetime's end, both climb inside starglow on flight… drip-dropping of diamond confetti !
* dedicated to loving couples celebrating their 50th Valentine. Contest :Love Is In The Air Tonight Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron
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Negron Flores Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 10:13 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest.
Quigley Avatar
July 22, 2011 at 8:29 AM
This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Johnson Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Lovely Nette. congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 9:07 AM
Nette, Great entry for a top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 7:13 AM
What a wonderful postscript and dedication this lovely poem holds! Congrats to Nette !
Neels Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Nette, super congratulations on your win in Brian's contest :) *hugs*
Brown Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:21 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Nette. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 6:13 AM
Congrats Nette luv on another first place win.. so happy to be sharing with u ... and please send me some golden confetti.. to celebrate ..haha.. enjoy ..
Fraser Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 9:31 AM
Terrific piece Nette. It's sure to do well in Adeleke's contest. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Amazing astounding awesome articulate artistic ..Nette my friend.. great inspiration to those who are headed for their fiftieth celebration .. doubt if Ron and I will make that ..haha.. good luck in the contest.. as Adeleke will just luv..my friend...
Beck Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:38 AM
A poet calld Nette Master of valued word and vignette “Wrote” many a beautiful verse Taken from another’s purse. I am that loser of money And I want ‘em back, honey.
Beck Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:25 AM
I will not enter this contest, thus allowing you to win by default - with great affection and humour :)).........Syd
Beck Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:23 AM
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...........nice
Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 7:12 AM
I picture them having a party on a beach with this one. You used alliteration in every single word. I bet Adeleke will love it! Good luck in the contest, sweetie!
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:03 AM
Reads like winning material to me..My parents celebrated their 76th...Almost to 77 but didn't quite make it..Good luck in the contest with this great Alliteration...Sara
Mannan Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 1:11 AM
Such lovely images Nette. All the best for the contest.
Bloomsfield Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 11:06 PM
beautiful,i love diamond dreams,lovely entry.
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