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Written for the golden shovel contest sponsored by Craig.

this is a dedication to all warriors out there especially,Empoetic, Michelle, Theauraofrhymes, Subhadra, J (fadingstarsilence) lionessonpaper and also a warrior poetess I came across here "constance" thank you for inspiring me! Your strength and courage is beyond I could really describe, but I hope you know that I tried . And you are always appreciated! 

In a cynical realm where truth is tainted in black, rises she, amidst whirling vortexes veiling reveries where she walks. Yet society thrums thick skinned lies, whilst morning moon sighs in- silence, seeing sunrise through eyes that mirror golden beauty. Her persona resembles firm perennial petals like, maternal warriors waltzing through wistful winds, singing the, song of survival in loneliness through every forlorn night. She's bestowed with selfless angels thawing wicked webs of, time, freezing the rainbows hidden behind cloudless, cerulean wrapped in balmy breeze blowing along cashmere climes. She is her own sorceress with an invisible ring and silver spells, her unbreakable spirit shines like starry amulets of faith, sparkling across cold midnight skies. She still composes calm symphonies in elegance and, patience, whilst ignorant tongues concoct storms amongst all, evil that reeks within a community that's- ready to place names, find fault in words within the chorus of life, best, written for the unheard voices ostracized, by merciless tunes of, the past, where freedom fighters were left alone in the dark. But she sprouts, like a sunflower growing in the cracks of emptiness and, like an untamable warrior, she serves hope and love, that beams so bright. “She walks in beauty, like the night Of cloudless climes and starry skies;And all that’s best of dark and bright  Lord Byron – She Walks in Beauty”

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Date: 10/7/2023 11:05:00 AM
This is a very creative write within a very restrictive format - well done!
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/9/2023 4:51:00 AM
Dear Craig i was so nervous to post this as i didnt think it was simple enough, but i am so grateful for your support and for the inspiration. Thank you so very much truly for placing me in your precious winners list. Sending you light today and always
Date: 9/30/2023 4:58:00 PM
Amazing work Ink, how you weaved the quote by Lord Byron into your poem is incredible… Belle
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Date: 9/29/2023 11:56:00 PM
Ink, your poem is beautiful !
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Date: 9/26/2023 11:24:00 PM
You are so appreciative of other's talents dear Empress. From all your poems and comments this is what I assume of your personality! What a glorious tribute to your fellow poets - the true warriors who have faced the 'slings and arrows of life', yet courageously sprung back to life. The reference to Constance is so fitting here. She is "like a sunflower growing in the cracks of emptiness and, like an untamable warrior, she serves hope and love, that beams so bright! " . Simply beautiful dear Empress.
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Date: 9/26/2023 8:32:00 PM
Wow! You've done this one so beautifully, IE, the words incorporated flow from one line to the next, awesome writing and dedication to beautiful warriors:)
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Date: 9/26/2023 1:54:00 PM
Amazing! My head is spinning!
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Date: 9/25/2023 9:54:00 PM
Ahhh..all you’ve truly honored us with reflects right back to you, my beautiful soul sis..one who always supports, encourages, whether a friend or an acquaintance, a new friend, an old friend, you are the most selfless and graceful and beautiful humans I know. Your heart speaks volumes with the way your thoughts run so deep, fairness and compassion engraved in your soul, always so helpful and uplifting to all those you touch..who get to know the true you..
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/25/2023 10:00:00 PM
Infinitely got your back, behind, beside, and leading when you need a rest, for you always think of others before yourself, always making sure one doesn’t feel isolated..holding your head up and shoulders back, standing tall with the weight of the world haunting you, still, you rise and fly above the shadows, shining your bright light!
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Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/25/2023 9:56:00 PM
I can honestly say with my whole heart, I have never met someone as sweet and beautiful as you are, my soul sis! And let’s not get started on your poetry..this piece touches me deep within, bringing me to tears with the divinity, strength, empowerment of your poem..how you view us, I pray I am to you as you are to me. So blessed to have you, my beautiful soul sis! <3
Date: 9/25/2023 1:38:00 AM
The whole poem is incredible dear Inky, and a great tribute to all the warrior women out there, I particularly love these lines ...She is her own sorceress with an invisible ring and silver spells, her unbreakable spirit shines like starry amulets of faith, sparkling across cold midnight skies.Just beautiful Love and Hugs
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:07:00 AM
Thank you beautiful soul truly for your generous and kind support, i appreciate your poetic presence wholeheartedly
Date: 9/24/2023 11:00:00 AM
A FAV for me, Empress, a heartfelt tribute to those brave and courageous women the stand tall amongst the threats and serve hope and love and allow their lights to shine brightly. Thank you for identifying a few as role models of the warriors you define. My experiences here on Poetry Soup would agree that these are deserving of such an honor, especially you. You are like the ones you describe. We are blessed to have you and the others share their wisdom with us. Write On! Bill
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and generous support Bill you are so supportive. Im forever grateful
Date: 9/24/2023 8:15:00 AM
What a masterpiece, 'Ink.' I'm awestruck almost unable to express what I want to say about your beautiful poem. First, I've always liked Lord Byron, especially "She walks in beauty." I like 'she's her own sorceress' with an invisible ring...' just captivating. Am faving this one definitely. You're amazing, Sara
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:08:00 AM
Awwwn this means alot seriously coming from a talented poetess like u i appreciate u so much thank u so very much
Date: 9/24/2023 7:50:00 AM
Oh my goodness. I don't even know what to say. What anincredible Honor to be included in this dedication. This poem is beautiful on so many levels... the delicate and incredible word weaving, the imagery, and the absolute light of strength, hope and love infused here. Thank you for your beautiful heart and this piece. (I keep forgetting I can't include emojis! Lol.)
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:09:00 AM
My warrior poetess u deserve more than just a poem truly for your strength and all that u are. Thank you so much
Date: 9/24/2023 7:29:00 AM
I like the quote from Lord Byron. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:10:00 AM
It was a hard challenge, but i thought i can try this quote that was provided by craig . Thank you so much for reading
Date: 9/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
Awesome dedication inky. Yeah, I remember you said you had one ready to fire up. Mine was a simply ditty but yours rocks. That last line reminds me so much of Michelle's poetry. She almost always ends on a positive note. In any case, poems like this that uplift others rather than tear down is exactly what this place needs. Well done
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:10:00 AM
I like the timing, since Hiya got potd today. Quite a vindication
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/24/2023 5:57:00 AM
Yes it took me two days to write this, its a bit tricky this form but was fun. Yes any empowering poem will sound like our warrior poetess michelle. Urs was brilliant too tho i was nervous to post this cus well it was hard lol
Date: 9/24/2023 5:47:00 AM
Dear friend Ink, your writing has captivated me with its enchanting tones and rhymes. The way you have brilliantly described the strength in your words is truly remarkable. Every line is impeccably crafted, evoking vivid images and emotions. Your mastery in using the prompt to compose such a piece is awe-inspiring. It is no easy feat to use only one word at the end of each verse, but you have executed it flawlessly, showcasing your skill in manipulating words as a very talented poetess.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:10:00 AM
Thank you always my friend for being so supportive and kind I appreciate your kindness always
Date: 9/24/2023 5:37:00 AM
But she sprouts, like a sunflower growing in the cracks of emptiness and, like an untamable warrior, she serves hope and love, that beams so bright--I like the voice of your upbeat ending, Ink. Lord Byron inspired you to write this tribute to your friends. Best to you and your friends.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:11:00 AM
Ah thank u so much vijay always for reading and for your generous support truly grateful
Date: 9/24/2023 5:17:00 AM
But she sprouts, like a sunflower growing in the cracks of emptiness and, like an untamable warrior, she serves hope and love, that beams so bright. What gorgeous words. My granddaughters sent a lovely spray of sunflowers when my mom died and I love Minnesota sunflowers too. Hope filled vitality. Lovely!
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:12:00 AM
Dear Kim thank you for dropping by and for your generous and kind feedback, and thank u for sharing your experience too and im so sorry for your loss and sunflowers are soulful, your grand daughters sound so sweet and kind. Sending you well wishes always
Date: 9/24/2023 4:46:00 AM
such enchanting tones and undertones, brilliantly done. stirs flavors of fire and emotional desire, so enjoyed. Abundant pools of whispering waters, trembling like the seas who are startled awake by the hurricane's dreams. A blessing, a rising hope, a joy to read and reflect upon. God bless you with a win. Much love sent, Gina
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/25/2023 10:13:00 AM
Thank you sweet Gina for this beautiful and very heartfelt comment truly i appreciate all your support always
Date: 9/24/2023 2:42:00 AM
Awwn, this is so kind and sweet of you to have written this poem dedication to all the warrior poetess, they truly deserve this! How impeccably and evocatively you've described the strength here.. Just beyond amazing.. Fighting through the dark, fireflies of faith & resilience have always coruscated in their hearts, forevermore.. And you've wonderfully expressed this! You yourself, are an inspiring soul who always thrives by radiating kindness, there are so many lines here that I loved!!
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Date: 9/24/2023 2:45:00 AM
"Her persona resembles firm perennial petals like", "maternal warriors waltzing through", "she's her own sorceress" Gosh, the imageries are so breathtaking here, absolutely phenomenal, I wish you the all the best for the contest, I enjoyed reading this :)
Date: 9/24/2023 1:59:00 AM
Can a man not be a warrior also? Great dedication to you friends.. who have all commented with their approval.. I cannot comment on this form, as I am not aware of it.. We need real warrior women out there, in this sickening patriarchal world.. Constance is a great poet who has battled many storms and held her head high.. A true inspiration as are all the other people you have mentioned.. Good luck in the contest dear..
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Date: 9/24/2023 5:59:00 AM
Lol awwn silent one next one will be a dedication to all male warriors! Deffo thank u for ur support and yes all of them are strong warriors, inspired me to write this
Date: 9/24/2023 1:26:00 AM
Ayeeee ayeeeee papi!!! I just saw that you mentioned me too… awwwwn I am soo touched …thank you soo much.. u made me a warrior <3 you are my warrior!!!!! I warrior for u aee
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Date: 9/24/2023 1:21:00 AM
First off, a huge thank you for dedicating this poem to me. I'm touched, deeply honoured and grateful beyond words. It is always heartening to know that when you give love, the universe bestows you manifold times over with it. The verses here are written in such heartfelt manner. I love in particular the stanza where you made us sorceresses, bestowing upon us magical powers. Once again, you've waved your magical quill and composed such beautiful verses to be admired. Thank you, dearest!
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/24/2023 1:28:00 AM
Haha yes sorcerers ?? awwn you inspire me hun you are such a strong and beautiful soul i hope you’ll always remember that. Thank u for being there for me
Date: 9/24/2023 1:20:00 AM
Ooo whirling vortexes veiling reveries where she walks, sunrise through the eyes that mirror golden beauty,.. mmm look that gorgeous weave!!! You create such breathtaking artistry papi.. freeezing the rainbows hidden behind cloudless,.. mmmm she is her own sorceress with an invisible ring and silver spells,… ooo enchanting!! Mmmmm that ending!!! Like an untamable warrior, she serves hope and love , that beams soo bright!!! Mmm u r my warrior too papi!! This piece is soo effortlessly woven!!!
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/24/2023 1:27:00 AM
Awwn papi u ma warrior for life tooo!!! Your strength inspires me truly always and you are part of my strength
Date: 9/24/2023 1:01:00 AM
Awww so much power in the poem . Thank you for dedicating it to me . I know sunflower is your fave flower . I love how well you have written this . Inspired me to write a poem like this although I know I can’t write like you do . Well done
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/24/2023 1:26:00 AM
Awww you are too humble and you have no idea how strong you are! I am proud of all that you’ve achieved and how far you’ve come too! Love you always

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