Golden Scroll

Golden Scroll


Your golden words in divine scroll,
As the time takes its toll,
Its true copy deep in my heart,
Every moment tears my soul apart,

May I read your words aloud,
Unveil the sunshine, let go the cloud,

"Still adore the first day I saw you,
Blue dress, long hair, beauty came true,
Your glittering eyes and a sweet smile,
Nothing could have been more fragile,

Slowly as I knew your heart,
You were rather better smart,
Humble to all and very kind,
I could read your intense thoughtful mind,

Even if some day far I am gone,
With you will ever stay my clone ,
Forget not all our meets and treats,
Sweet and at times sour greets,

Blush on your face and rosy grace,
Icy cold winters and firing embrace,
You were looking far more bright,
Forget not our first intimate delight !

Thanks to you for keeping patience,
You have proved to be of great endurance,
Losing me shouldn't lessen your glow,
Wish time had stopped or moved slow !"

Golden words today have turned amber,
Eyes wet, heart fuming to smoky chamber !


Written on 2/8/14
Contest- fill up the scroll
Sponsor- Isaiah Zerbst 

Ranked 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 8/19/2014 10:04:00 AM
Beautiful write - beautiful win!Congratulations, Dr. Upma! Well-deserved! Pandita
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Date: 8/18/2014 5:58:00 PM
An excellent poem that starts off on a high and never wavers. Well done, Upma, and congratulations!! // paul
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Date: 8/17/2014 10:13:00 AM
great great write.. :) Congratulation DR.// :d sweet and endearing ad like the first lines.. :D
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Date: 8/17/2014 7:07:00 AM
Lovely, Dr Upma. :) Congrats on your win....I was touched by the line that reads that the true copy is kept in the heart. Touching.
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Date: 8/17/2014 2:38:00 AM
Lovely Dr Upma many congratulations xx
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Date: 8/16/2014 4:24:00 PM
Congrats Dr Upma...yours are golden words. BG
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Date: 8/16/2014 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Upma. Glad to see you enjoying this win.
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Date: 8/16/2014 2:23:00 PM
And ... to the smoky chamber. Congrats on a deserved win.
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:14:00 PM
Simply stunning I love the imagery - many congratulations:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:01:00 PM
Your beginning verses are resplendent! Just enough there to really see her.
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Date: 8/3/2014 4:27:00 AM
I commend you for your poetry and relentless community building efforts here at the soup!
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Date: 8/2/2014 2:07:00 PM
How beautiful is this love scroll...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:27:00 PM
charmingly delightful, dr urma... awesome imagery and wordplay!.. huggs
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