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Golden Glow

When I was coal you mined my soul and treasure there you found: a heart, stone cold, but solid gold, was buried underground. So long I hoped and blindly groped for rescue by the brave; from skulking fears and sour tears that haunted my dark cave. The sifters left my heart bereft of airy thoughts and dreams; in all their toil, neglected soil, but splashed in barren streams. The dirtied face of my disgrace you polished with your sleeve; your zeal above mere heartfelt love in silken arms we'll weave. My luster bright in dawning light forever shall I owe, to she who dug beneath my shrug and found the golden glow.

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Date: 6/22/2025 11:28:00 AM
Hello Ron, this is a beautifully done poem. I like the last verse. Your friend, /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/23/2025 9:28:00 AM
Hello Ron, You are welcome. I am glad that the glow is still with you. Your welcome. Your friend, /Darlene/
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Ron VanHooser
Date: 6/22/2025 11:59:00 AM
Hi Darlene, thank you for your comments, in particular on the last verse...that verse harkens back to a time when I really didn't think I was worth finding, but incredibly, that wasn't true and that glow has been there ever since. Thank you again! Your friend, Ron

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