Golden Fall

Autumn spreads sparkling spectrum,
trees absorb the color burst.
The leaves turn gold as they wilt,
from blazed boughs they fall.

autumndodoitsu

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Silent One

October 24, 2023 at 12:56 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Subimal Sinha-Roy

October 24, 2023 at 10:04 PM

Many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

October 24, 2023 at 6:00 AM

Lovely imagery, dear Subimal! Love the alliteration and the Autumn boughs ablaze!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

October 24, 2023 at 10:03 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Ink Empress

October 24, 2023 at 3:29 AM

A very beautiful and descriptive dodoitsu, highlighting the beauty of autumn with such creative and flawless imagery! I love how you always write, and this is no exception, i especially love the lines “ spreads sparkling spectrum” seamless alliterations! “ from blazed boughs they fall” so melodious as well as ethereal! And has a delicate touch of poetic eloquence! Thank you so much for writing! CONGRATULATIONS on winning! Well deserved!

Subimal Sinha-Roy

October 24, 2023 at 10:03 PM

Thank you so much for the placement and for your encouraging comments.