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Golden Fall

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October 19, 2023

Contest : Dodoitsu

Sponsored by : Ink Empress

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Autumn spreads sparkling spectrum, trees absorb the color burst. The leaves turn gold as they wilt, from blazed boughs they fall.

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Silent One
Date: 10/24/2023 12:56:00 PM
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Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/24/2023 10:04:00 PM
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Many thanks.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/24/2023 6:00:00 AM
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Lovely imagery, dear Subimal! Love the alliteration and the Autumn boughs ablaze!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/24/2023 10:03:00 PM
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Thank you, Kim.
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Ink Empress
Date: 10/24/2023 3:29:00 AM
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A very beautiful and descriptive dodoitsu, highlighting the beauty of autumn with such creative and flawless imagery! I love how you always write, and this is no exception, i especially love the lines “ spreads sparkling spectrum” seamless alliterations! “ from blazed boughs they fall” so melodious as well as ethereal! And has a delicate touch of poetic eloquence! Thank you so much for writing! CONGRATULATIONS on winning! Well deserved!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/24/2023 10:03:00 PM
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Thank you so much for the placement and for your encouraging comments.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/19/2023 11:11:00 AM
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A creative/fun Dodoitsu write. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/24/2023 10:02:00 PM
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Thank you.
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Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 10/19/2023 3:08:00 AM
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autumn spreads its shining on the nature; nice to read you
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/24/2023 10:02:00 PM
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Many thanks.
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Daisy Meadows
Date: 10/19/2023 12:40:00 AM
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A good autumn poem. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/24/2023 10:02:00 PM
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Thank you so much.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2023 11:53:00 PM
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Beautiful
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/24/2023 10:01:00 PM
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Thank you.

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