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Golden Eagle

The end of summer has turned dull.
O’er rugged land on Isle of Mull
a golden eagle flies up high
where the wind howls and clouds float by,
then it glides down graceful and free
towards a tall imposing tree.
There it alights. It comes to rest
upon the branches where its nest
is placed in order to outwit
unwelcome foes. The fledglings sit
excited, for it is now time
to flap their wings and upwards climb.

Calling each other as they soar,
swooping and circling by the shore
as mother eagle looks from high
she keeps on them a watchful eye.

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21st October, 2015
Contest: Golden Eagle
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Placed 2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 8/7/2018 10:50:00 PM
Oh, if only one could have wings and soar the wild horizon with the smooth glide of an eagle, dear Paul.. what a glorious depiction of elegance, grace, intensity and beauty. A gorgeous poem my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
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Paul Callus
Date: 8/9/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely and complimentary comments, dear Susan. If I remember correctly, this poem had to make use of several prompt words. So glad you enjoyed it my friend. Warm regards & hugs // paul
Date: 5/9/2017 4:01:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Paul. No wonder you got such a high placing!! Well done! Regards, John.
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Date: 5/10/2017 11:37:00 AM
Thank you, John. I was quite pleased with the end result, considering that I had to make use of a set of words given by the sponsor. Regards // paul
Date: 10/26/2015 7:09:00 AM
congrats for the win Paul!! weeee, pizza on the way! ~olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 10/26/2015 5:50:00 PM
THANK YOU oLIVE_ELOI!! Pizza is always welcome, as long as it's thin and crusty! Oh...there's a knock on the door...must be the delivery man:) Hugs // paul
Date: 10/24/2015 4:22:00 AM
A 7 :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 5:06:00 PM
txs :)
Date: 10/24/2015 4:21:00 AM
Wonderfully done Paul, a very special pen you have indeed, well done on your win too :) , warm rgds, Laura
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 5:05:00 PM
Many thanks, Laura! Your generous comments are truly appreciated. Enjoy your weekend:) Warm regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 10:15:00 PM
Paul congratulations on your win my friend. A well deserved one at that. Congratulations!!!
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 5:53:00 PM
Thank you my friend...a most welcome visitor to my pages:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 5:07:00 PM
Ain't life grand? I am so happy for your win, Paul ... CayCay
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Date: 10/24/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, CayCay! Your encouragement and support are appreciated. Yes, life can be beautiful...notwithstanding the clouds that at times darken the sky! I offer you a smile for a lovely weekend:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 2:37:00 PM
Congrats on your eagle landing on the winners’ page..Way to go!!! Aren’t those eagles a vision of beauty..Sara
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 4:04:00 PM
Eagles dare us to look and admire!! Thank you Sara. have a nice weekend. // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 8:59:00 AM
Nicely done, Paul. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 10/23/2015 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Enjoyed your winning entry, too:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 8:49:00 AM
To be an eagle...Congratulations, Paul!
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:42:00 PM
...And to have wings!! Thank you Lin. Let us dream together:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 7:25:00 AM
This is so marvellous!! Congratulations on your lovely win!! :D :D
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Sneha:) Glad you enjoyed. ~ Sweet regards // paul
Date: 10/23/2015 5:25:00 AM
so beautifully penned Paul congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:12:00 PM
Many thanks, Jan; still have to see the winning poems. Hugs // paul
Date: 10/22/2015 2:39:00 PM
- I admire this amazing poem ..... a winning poem, true my words Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:07:00 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Anne Lise:) Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul
Date: 10/22/2015 11:10:00 AM
magical bird, also poet and poem,
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:10:00 PM
You killed 3 birds with one stone, Harry:))) Thank you! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/22/2015 8:29:00 AM
Your poem soars as high as your majestic subject!
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Date: 10/23/2015 3:09:00 PM
Thank you for your judgment, Richard! It did indeed soar to the winners' list:) ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/22/2015 4:18:00 AM
Always excellent poetry from you, Paul. This one is as majestic as mother eagle herself. Always, Laura
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Date: 10/23/2015 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, Laura; your generous comments are much appreciated. ~ Take care and enjoy your weekend. Regards // paul
Date: 10/22/2015 12:08:00 AM
This poem is really beautiful, Paul. The rhyming, combined with flowing lines and wonderful images, makes it so enjoyable... Good luck in Shadow's contest!
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Date: 10/23/2015 2:47:00 PM
And your comments are a joy to read, Kelly:) Thank you ~ Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Date: 10/21/2015 9:28:00 PM
There are some impressive and 'awe' inspiring lines in your beautiful poem. The way it read was magical to me ... CayCay
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Date: 10/23/2015 1:54:00 PM
Your lovely feedback leaves me in awe, CayCay! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 10/21/2015 9:16:00 PM
Very nice Paul, I like this...good luck my friend :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2015 1:31:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Edward. Thank you for stopping by. // paul
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