Golden Cap

Crowning the mountain,
A tiara of sunrays:
Summit of glory.

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James Fraser

February 5, 2010 at 8:55 AM

You certainly struck gold with this one Raul, super Haiku >> James

Tim Ryerson

January 29, 2010 at 8:00 PM

Cap, crown, tiara and summit...Mercy me... Good stuff Raul...And thanks for your comment on my most recent...I learned about Haikus from you, by the way...Tim

James Marshall Goff

January 29, 2010 at 1:53 PM

celestial, indeed! nice Raul! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 28, 2010 at 7:56 PM

Hi Raul... I am leaving the Soup Site due to overwhelming controversy over my three way collaboration with Jared Pickett and Sam Brooks.. this was reported to soup management and I received a most unkind e mail from them informing me that my poetry was unacceptable.. therefore I have decided to leave on my own.. I also have removed my poem from your current contest... thankxxx for being a great friend to me while I was here... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Charmaine Chircop

January 27, 2010 at 10:15 AM

Exceptional Haiku Raul,Indeed a Haiku Master and Friend:) Charma

Gert W. Knop

January 27, 2010 at 7:46 AM

Lovely Haiku, Raúl! "Summit of glory"! Enjoyed it and thanks for your comments. Qué estes bien mi amigo...Gert

Marty Owens

January 25, 2010 at 6:46 PM

This is another beautiful Haiku...love it...Marty

Elaine George

January 25, 2010 at 8:19 AM

Beuatiful picture you paint with this one, Raul. Thank you for sharing, and thank you for your kind comments. lainie.

Joyce Johnson

January 24, 2010 at 2:16 PM

Very nice Raul. Thak you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

January 23, 2010 at 5:26 PM

Wow! Good use of imagery. You paint a picture with words in this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Colleen Bono

January 23, 2010 at 4:17 PM

thank you for everything.

Carrie Richards

January 23, 2010 at 12:42 PM

Love this beautiful haiku.....putting such a sunny image in my mind, as I look at cloudy, dark and gloomy day, with snow clouds hanging low over our nearby mountains! Thank you for bringing a little sunshine into my day! :)

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